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a yo dawg if you don no how be then read tha title\\
talk shit doc will be checkin for *signs thatz vital\\
i tried to be coo wit yall wanna who talk shit\\
like you don know that i pop non-stop like pringles bitch\\
and niggaz on tha web go to far thinkin i wont find ya\\
you hear "click, click" turn around i'm right behind ya\\
wit a mac to ur you cranium, your shut up now like sealed your mouth why titanium\\
come on dawg i warned you twice now i gotta show that i aint nice\\

chorus2x - im tellin you right now im raider like jerry Rice
bullets will eat at your skull hungrily like head lice,i thought i told yall niggaz that im not nice

nothing is price shit my head has price, *wanted in america for plastic baggin snow white\\
on my block niggaz hope they end they have teeth like they tryin ta date Obie Trice\\
not me tho cuz i steal on niggaz like a thief in tha night\\
so if you wanna get tipsy challenge bk to fight\\
i''l have yo ass do in tha hood hop hangin from a street light\\
nigga keep talkin you might just lose ya life\\
because nigga like a moovie director i shoot clips all night\\
i thought i told yall tha i not fuckin nice\\

chorus2x



get at me wit 1-10 ranking

* stands for vital signs which are signs doctors look for to make sure your alive

*2 double meaning think about it kids

ok? this was good for a start, but it needs some work. work on ur structure, wordplay, n flow. but this was a good shot. keep elevatein dawg. pc

aight thanks uppin for criticsm

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