if u still up to it
10 lines due 15 minutes after u check in

aight dawg, so its 10 lines... I'm rdy for diz i hope. who goes first?

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both. the verse is due in 15 minutes startin now

Aight yo check diz...

Yeh diz iz me $-T4NG! blowin diz fuckin battle wit a bang! showin diz fucka KanG Korrupt! I'll spit my azn ryhmes thru him to make his azz shut da fuck up!
Heard rumorz of u purpously droppin the soap takin it up da butt,
And i also over heard u wuz da jail cell slutt, shitty rep. mus not be gettin enough luck,
Cook yo azz up on my wak (Wauk) make yo lil korrupted azz to not shit talk!
I see ur kind walk da streetz nothin but lil fuckin wannabe 2pacz,
U bustin in diz thread wantin to battle and rap in here?
Last wordz heard from u wuz "I love it in tha rear!"
Right before i blow yo azz away wit my azn technique makin ya disappear!

APWW! I Love Rice.

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im positvely charged but im oozing with negatvity
im cruisin usin u to develop my creativity
im livid im givin myself and no one else the victiry
i pound and pound away at ur rhymes untll u sick of me
u dick lovin pussy best believe that u my enemy
i'll assasinate ur ass like mr J F Kennedy
u killin this rap game and im here as a remedy
charged with a felony for killin rice dude he claimin he wasnt feelin me
im ill in this game kill cats jus for fame
im new to hip hop but sonn yall remember my name

im so tired and stoned at the same time...ha ha nice dawg killin rice dude ha ha. no offense tho wit my verse man.

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i liked it man, nice formation 10 lines. fav part wuz u killin me Lol.

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juz to let pplz kno...Wak iz an azn cooking pan, its pronounced az (Walk) or Wauk or wuteva jus fo yo memo

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its wok dumbass

y'all really sucked but i'm going with azn i'm really just bored and shit and have nothing to do so i'm voting yea
hey go vote honestly on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135151
thanks alot

ay flipsix u faggot explain yur vote, or r u dick ridin'

WORD NEED TO EXPLAIN THE VOTE A LITTLE BETTER /\ /\ /\ /\

Opener- Kang, Azian your's was wack.
Closer- Azian, cause Kang you fell off.
Multi's- none
Flow- Kang, (but they both need work.
Personals- none
Punches- Kang,
Wordplay- ummmm... no
Creativity- not the least bit
Originaliy-- yea those were both "very very origional"

DEDUCTIONS
Bite'n-
Feed'n-
Overtime-
Over bar limit-
Other-


Overall- Nice drop, keep elivaten both of ya, ya should have some good battles if ya stick to people with your same skill level. This one goes to Kang for obvious reasons. Better punches, flow and it made sense.


Return the favour click on the link below. If you don't, then don't expect another vote on your battles.....lol...

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yeh i sucked ballz at dis one...vote the battle me and Xxxtasy had. :-)

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uppin 4 votes