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Old 06-14-04, 01:34 PM   #1
flow2crazy
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Poppin Them Pills

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Yo im trippin off some pills, not sure what they are but this feelin kills/
I cant stop laughin, i guess some funny shit happened/
I dont remember any of the last 16 hours,
My homeboy told me i went into every house and took 2 showers/
Thought i was gettin chased by a truck but it turned out to be a duck/
I was floatin on the lake and hittin some bitch wit a rake/
I keep jumpin in the pool cuz im lookin fo my cool/
Lost my shoes on my feet and my cars out in da street/
Took 4 speed when i felt my world slowin, gotta remember the pace and keep on goin/
Runnin on air, losin my hair, man im so high i fought a bear/
Smokin weed, drinkin beer, tryin to see if my high can last the whole year/
The trees are blue and who are you, hey i forgot where i put the foo(food)/

Im comin off my high, still tryin to touch the sky/
My shoes are back and the water aint black/
Imma try walkin cuz man i gotta piss, most of ur raps r gay cuz all u can do is diss/

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Old 06-14-04, 04:21 PM   #2
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You should work on your flow. And vocab. And rhyme scheme (two-liners basically suck. Even wit internal rhyme, they suck.). But hell, it was funny...
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