5 lines mini no crew

Yo Yo You jus came here you jus startin/
so so please dont come in here fartin/
:ready:
This wack nigga think he da shit/
Dont worry ill have dis wigga outa here in a little bit/
Yo sonney im one level above you im in a crew/
you a wanna be emcee im gonna slauter you/
You da future of vannilla ice dont even say no/
You like a gay wannabe you a homo/
You a Bitched out rapper that jus got hitched congrats you gay strippen bitch/

due 20 min of 10 or my win by k o

look at this punk callin me out cos we noobies//
thinkin hes bright but its bout to get gloomy//
hes huffin n puffin cos he girlfriend jus blew me//
wont do an audio, his high voice goes str8 thru me//
if my rhymes dnt hit then i jus use my click//
make you a transexual by shootin at ya dick//
this chump needs a hammer jus to make a hit//
look closer, he aint spittin, i jus made him sick//
take a lesson from the soldier, i'l mould ya like plaster//
let everyone vote, who da real rap master??

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come on people get voting, good luck mate....you'll need it.lol

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ya not bad yo you have nice rymhes im want you to join the dope emcees of amreica crew as 1st recuiter

i would say that this battle was pretty bad on both sides. ya both had very week rhymes and your styles were simple. there was some decent punch lines on both sides but overall out of ten this battle would be a 6 on both sides at most...its a tossup
vote: Soldier


drop an honest vote on da battles below....

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Rap Master's Drop:

Yo Yo You jus came here you jus startin/
so so please dont come in here fartin/
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS WEAK OPENER 0/10
This wack nigga think he da shit/
Dont worry ill have dis wigga outa here in a little bit/
WEAK BUT AT LEAST A PERSONAL 2/10
Yo sonney im one level above you im in a crew/
you a wanna be emcee im gonna slauter you/
WEAK AGAIN 2/10
You da future of vannilla ice dont even say no/
You like a gay wannabe you a homo/
GAY JOKES ARE FUCKIN' PLAYED OUT 1/10
You a Bitched out rapper that jus got hitched/
congrats you gay strippen bitch/
WEAK ASS CLOSER EXPAND YOUR VOCABULARY 0/10

OVERALL: 1/10

Soldier's Drop:

look at this punk callin me out cos we noobies//
thinkin hes bright but its bout to get gloomy//
WEAK OPENER IN MY OPINION 3/10
hes huffin n puffin cos he girlfriend jus blew me//
wont do an audio, his high voice goes str8 thru me//
IT WAS AIGHT NUTHIN SPECIAL 3/10
if my rhymes dnt hit then i jus use my click//
make you a transexual by shootin at ya dick//
AS I SAID GAY JOKES ARE PLAYED 3/10
this chump needs a hammer jus to make a hit//
look closer, he aint spittin, i jus made him sick//
WEAK BUT WHATEVER YOU WIN THIS ANYWAYZ 5/10
take a lesson from the soldier, i'l mould ya like plaster//
let everyone vote, who da real rap master??
WEAK AGAIN BUT WHATEVER 3/10

OVERALL: 4/10

VOTE GOES TO: SOLDIER

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Oops Screw Up A Lil Meant 4/10 For Rap Master & 6/10 For Soldier
And Screwed Up Some Of Rp's Grade Sorry For That.

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WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS WEAK OPENER 0/10

hahah i never knew u culdnt even give sum1 credit even thought it sucked so bad...

u both suck... clit shit it rhyme scheme sucks.. soldier u was decent.. and had atleast an ok punch so u win

v/soldier

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get the votes in n finish this off!

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ayo this battle was lackin all the important elements to a good battle .. punches , personals , metahs , flow fuckin everything by both parties .. i guess if i had to vote for someone it has to be Solider cause he at least tried to make a decent rap .. both of ya'll need to eleavete before you battle .. seriously


vote- SOLIDER

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