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Old 06-09-04, 07:42 PM   #1
smartzz
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From: jersee
SmArTzZ vs Lil-trip

IP: 7BE2 A0A1

10 lina max
no dr votes
no hate votes
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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-09-04, 08:05 PM   #2
smartzz
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From: jersee
Exclamation SmArtzz vs Lil trip

IP: 4289 77F4


leave cats *lyrically consumed* decomposed in soil after being *literally doomed*..//
only way *he holds shells* is *ITALY SPOONS*and i assume this "MC'S" really a LIL BITCH../
For tryna settle-shyt..now ya "GAMES OVER"cuz u just a fake ass "LITTLE FLIP"....//
think im joking till i leave u in a "little ditch"and basically you not an MC just BITIN-A-STYLE.../
call him *trip* without the little, cause he gon be *GONE FOR A WHILE*...//
teeth gone then you *Not-gonna-smile* you gotta be whilin to go against me knowing you'll get "crippled-kid".../
so i guess its self explanatory.... why they call you *LITTLE-TRIP"...//
i finish kids...spit them out after consumin them...just mad cause ya girl *GO AROUND* like a *rumor and*...yeah shes a hoe..../
if your convinced its love then your *slow* cuz she dont show love and you *know* that playin tic-tac-toe only time you get *X's n O's*...//
took ya bitch..n slept in ya hoes ...while u *stab guys* like a *de-prived*..*gay-jason*stop rappin..cuz only time there will be a..*nice trip* is a *VACATION*..../
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-09-04, 09:02 PM   #3
Lil-trip
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...

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Yo no smart ass jus a dumbass who reps 29kgs as his Estimated Mass
Slinky met dinky when this chynk bitch shot another mans "Spit" out his ass
yo bitch ass will be walkin wit crutches aint no real way you can touch dis
yo keystyle lacks real punches it reminds me of yo asshole rusted n busted
couldnt win this spit if i yo lines married me than took it after you bury me
aint no rhyme charity i upped n left this american pie "Jim" like Michelle Flarity
bitch tryin to be my brother you chose two dads n 50 chose two mothers
fathers wit U showin one luv to another under yo nannys specially knit covers
Trips as stern as a tower stealth crippin i jus surprised bitches like u n devour
dum coward aint no thug ive seen more thug in a bitch reppin "White Power.."

holla
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Old 06-09-04, 09:08 PM   #4
smartzz
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From: jersee
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iight uppin
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-10-04, 01:23 AM   #5
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aight...

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uppin fo some honest votes wit some honest love, holla back wit a lil of both peace..
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Old 06-10-04, 05:08 PM   #6
smartzz
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From: jersee
IP: 3240 794D

uppin
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-10-04, 08:27 PM   #7
In-Vision
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okay smartzz your verse was good..very good flow..hard hitting punches..good structure....parts made me laugh..and very very strong personals.....I'd gtive you verse a 40 out of 50 my favorite line was.........teeth gone then you *Not-gonna-smile* you gotta be whilin to go against me knowing you'll get "crippled-kid".../
so i guess its self explanatory.... why they call you *LITTLE-TRIP"...//

that was pretty funny....anyways..good drop...and as far as for you Lil trip

your verse lacked structure...but the flow wqasn't bad..decent punches...accept for this punch...

yo bitch ass will be walkin wit crutches aint no real way you can touch dis
yo keystyle lacks real punches it reminds me of yo asshole rusted n busted


how you know what his assholes like? thats a diss on yourself kid..anyways...you had some okay lines...like this was my favorite

couldnt win this spit if i yo lines married me than took it after you bury me
aint no rhyme charity i upped n left this american pie "Jim" like Michelle Flarity

anyways...I'd say overall smartzz had this battle....but you totally lost it with that line about his asshole...that was the nail in the coffin man..no hate..keep bangin
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Old 06-10-04, 08:33 PM   #8
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aight

flow smartz

vocab smartz

punches smartz by a lil bit

humor both

overall vote smartz

nice battle u guy's lookin forward to another

o yeah go vote on my battles vs lil aj and outsider it would be apreciated heres a link to me and aj http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129101
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Old 06-10-04, 08:53 PM   #9
smartzz
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From: jersee
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iight uppin 4 votes
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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-11-04, 06:28 AM   #10
smartzz
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From: jersee
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can ppl vote
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-13-04, 01:59 PM   #11
smartzz
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From: jersee
IP: C1DA C961

uppin 4 votes
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-13-04, 02:35 PM   #12
DON
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aight im gona vote for liltrip cause i liked his punches specially the one bout the chinc. u need to work on structure a lot and smartz jus work on more personals. jus both keep practicin

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Old 06-13-04, 04:17 PM   #13
JaE uH-Oh!
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this was a give in...smartz had it all the way

lil trip..u need to seperate ya bars n have sum type of a structure to make it easier to catch ya flow on ya verse...

smartzz...nice verse but dont try to force any lines that arent there..it messes up ya flow nahmean?

+breakdown+
punchez:smartzz
flow:smartzz
comedy:trip
metas/multis:smartzz
overall:SMARTZZ

gluck to both mc;z...

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Old 06-15-04, 08:45 PM   #14
smartzz
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From: jersee
IP: 4289 77F4

uppin
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
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I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT
 
Old 06-15-04, 09:07 PM   #15
Ravage
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not really a tuff

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this was a good battle, even tho i dont like you, and your crew smartzz, trust me liltrip im not dick riding this bitch.... he just had better shit i though, but still fuck you and your crew but this spit was tight..
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