U Spit First Since I Set It Up

lol no no no the challenger always spits first...learn the rules!

Im da best in this game an i spit real stuff...
when i say 1 line u gone have enough..
Cause fuckin wit cass uh fuck up ya luck
an i turn thug breds into pups...

what else can i say i battle niggas 4 play..
an da bling on ma ring look like SUNRAYS....
IM uh newbe in dis piece...but i'll be the best...
cause da lyrics i spit put holes in ya chess..

When im on da top..
i'll have da shit on lock...
an take dat pic off cause u aint pac...

Dude flippin thru channels and done tuned into my frequency
I Guess ya frequently tune in hopin to catch a glimpse of me
He'll just be tryin to get personal, and hurt my "fillins"
But the only reason that they hurt, is from "chewin" villins
Heres your ticket for R.U.I, rhyming while under the influence
Go to ya W.A meetings so that ya can learn howta flow fluent
Your shit wouldnt be funky enough, if ya name was, the D.O.C
Im just tellin you how it is girl in real LIFE, just like P.O.D
My flavors perfered like picanti, dont do it your no Ashanti
When they ago askin you about your battle you had with this man
Youll say, it was like singing "flock of seagulls", "I RAN"

Spit it...no doubt...good luck

W.a = Wack Anonymous

Girl = Him!

Cass,You had a good flow n shit, but it was a little too much self glorification in your verse, and no hot punchlines dissing QBsmasher, you know what i'm sayin.. Your stucture was okay, no meta's, oh yea, "the sun rays thing", but it was self glorication.
QBsmasher basically brung more meta's and some multies, better stucture, good flow, better opener.. I have no give this one to QBsmasher Cuz...

cass,i thought your flow was good but you did'nt bring any heat"punches"at QB,
QBsmasher:i dint like your personals much,but you did bring alot more"skill"ta the battle,so i gotta give ya the vote,i gotta agree with Datruth29^^self glorification don't win battles,...
vote/QBsmasher
please return the favour n vote on 1 of these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 skforty7
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245 gunit
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134328 stank

Vote=QB

That was kinda a weak battle to me.Cass was spiting about hisself and not throwing punching like he should have been trying to do.QB throw a couple of punches and won it for himself.Battles are about who come with punches.QB came with them,Cass talked about hisself.Both could work on flow.Get some mulites,wordplay.Up ya game.

I'll poll when somebody votes on my battle,cuz I did take da time 2 read this shit!

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I was'nt feeling either verse but in truth Cass caught an asswhoopin. His self glorifying lines were kinda stupid and simple. QBs lines were simple too but they were directly made for battleing. Niether made any personals tho, U should do better Ur next time up.
flow, Qb..
punchess, Qb
structure, Qb altho his lost it at the end but it was str8
Metaphores, none
wordplay, Qb
Overall, Qb

V/Qbsmasher.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..