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RV 0 0%
Ameen 5 100.00%
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Old 07-08-04, 05:35 AM   #1
Ameen
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Ameen vs RV

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10 line Spit
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i'll spit now.......
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Old 07-08-04, 05:42 AM   #2
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I'm about 2 bury this kid, and I dont have 2 use DRAZTIK~MEAZUREZ//
This kid can't rap, he gets his kicks givin guys FAGGOT~PLEASURES//
You're gunna be burned off, you'll think 'man, he can cook!'
This MC is like a virgin, he really doesnt kno how 2 FUCK//
We know all your lines are bitten, you copied and PASTED IT//
U like a basketball player gettin on drugs, u had talent but u WASTED IT//
This kid been gone 4 weeks just thinkin of lyrics he could use against me THAT~WORK//
I'm about to beat him and then show everyone on this NET~WORK//
Why you even wanna challenge me,all this work just 2 step up and lose//
I'm about to blow on you like dynamites with a short fuse//
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Old 07-08-04, 05:56 AM   #3
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so i asked for a battle, and this was my response?
I feel like im playing basketball 1 on 1 with Barry Bonds
i'm MJ in this shit, you ain't even worth scoring on
i think you'd have a better chance battling your mom
or how bout I give up now, let you walk away with life
cuz we know, that by accepting this, you don't care about your pride
you obviously want defeat, so im giving it to you
and if you want another loss, go head and hit up me up dude
don't even need 10 lines, just needed 2
one to tell you you suck, the other to say im through
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Old 07-08-04, 06:41 AM   #4
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....wow...I wasn't feeling either one of your guys, but out of the two of you, I'd say Ameen had bitter punches, even though the punches you used have been used NUMEROUS times on here.

v/Ameen
 
Old 07-08-04, 07:55 AM   #5
Ameen
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1-0 to me......c'mon peeps dont be sleepin on this one
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Old 07-08-04, 02:18 PM   #6
Durmil
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pretty dull battle...but it went like this

Punches-Ameen
Personals-Neither
Multi's-Neither
Flow-RV
Wordplay/creativity-Ameen
Overall-Ameen

he had the better punches and just came harder...ya both need to elevate tho...keep at it
 
Old 07-08-04, 02:34 PM   #7
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Vote=Ameen

He had a nice opener and stayed wit decent punches throughout the whole battle.Had nice flow and good structure.RV your punches were not strong enough,well there wasn't none 4 real.You kept talking about how you gonna beat him & he don't want this,but you didn't throw a punch.Work on that.

I did take the time to read this shit,so VOTE ON MY BATTLES
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Old 07-08-04, 02:53 PM   #8
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Vote=Ameen

He had a nice opener and stayed wit decent punches throughout the whole battle.Had nice flow and good structure.RV your punches were not strong enough,well there wasn't none 4 real.You kept talking about how you gonna beat him & he don't want this,but you didn't throw a punch.Work on that.

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Old 07-08-04, 04:08 PM   #9
mistah_tate
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ok, i read both verses, and neither were really that good. not alot of punches no metaphors, not that good of wordplay. if i had to vote which was least bad then my vote goes to ameen.
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