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_Cass_ 0 0%
-Strype- 5 100.00%
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Old 07-09-04, 05:10 PM   #1
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-Strype- vs. _Cass_

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10 - 12 Lines
No crew/hate/dickryder votes.
I'll be nice n' give ya 2 hours from post time.


Good luck dawg, you're up..
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Old 07-09-04, 05:29 PM   #2
_Cass_
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I keep all da best macs an gats at that//
an if u tryta run u get uh clip in da back...i keep all da big stacks an pack da packs..
an have spinners on da 05 lack...
Im from A-town an dats where we get down..
where all hottest labels an thugs are found...
An if u around//u get uh round in ya dome..
so u beta watch how u talk an fix ya tone..
We smoke dem pipes an get real stoned..

if u get brave u'll get uh clip in ya rib cage..
an i'll whip ya ass u wuz uh slave..
cause macs an guns is the newest rave..
an we sell mass rocks like we was in stone age..
u mess wit me u'll get put in uh cage..
 
Old 07-09-04, 05:41 PM   #3
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nice battle but stype post your battle on are batte dipset oh yeah nice battle
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Old 07-09-04, 06:04 PM   #4
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Aight..


Look, we all know you're a newbie.. so Boastin' is Worthless
Check his battle with Bleek, this kid Posted TWO Verses
I treat you like Garbage.. so you start to Feed us Trash?
when this shit's over, none of the voters'll "C" your "ass"
challenge a vet? you're weak.. you might as well Ball & Pout
you knew you'd just get beat.. why the fuck did you Call Me Out?
I'm sick and tired of you scrubs thinkin' you can Spit Game
Here, borrow my Washing Machine.. clean off those Shit Stains
fuckin pussy.. you rap softer than the Blankets on my Bed
Learned so much from this loss that u're.. Thankin' me Instead



If there's anything you guys can't catch.. lemme know and I'll explain..
other than that, best of luck to ya dawg..

one~
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Old 07-09-04, 09:47 PM   #5
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uppin for votes.. why ya'll sleepin' on me?

drop an honest vote here, and I'll be sure to return the favor..
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Old 07-09-04, 09:54 PM   #6
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when this shit's over, none of the voters'll "C" your "ass" -- DAYUMN!!! I had to read that one twice just to make sure I read it right. Nice play

Cass, let me give you some advice. Talking about gats and owning guns in keystyles is 1. played out and 2. worthless (in my opinion) Don't talk about imaginary guns you may or may not have, just bring the tounge skills to the board. no disrespect
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Old 07-09-04, 10:15 PM   #7
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~~~~i coud'nt agree more~~~~~~
Cass, let me give you some advice. Talking about gats and owning guns in keystyles is 1. played out and 2. worthless (in my opinion) Don't talk about imaginary guns you may or may not have, just bring the tounge skills to the board. no disrespect
this was a really easy win in my mind for strype,he had way more elements in his verse n i dint find it boring"nice wordplay"...cass you need to elevate alot on punches n structure....vote/strype

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Old 07-09-04, 10:21 PM   #8
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hate to admit it, but strype you got potential. you easily won, but ill break down your verse so you can elevate.

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Look, we all know you're a newbie.. so Boastin' is Worthless
Check his battle with Bleek, this kid Posted TWO Verses
nice personal, good rhyme, good structure. could have hit harder if he had lost though
I treat you like Garbage.. so you start to Feed us Trash?
when this shit's over, none of the voters'll "C" your "ass"
garbage/trash was blah. c your ass was ok... but you could have done better with the concept.
challenge a vet? you're weak.. you might as well Ball & Pout
you knew you'd just get beat.. why the fuck did you Call Me Out?
eh... this is done pretty often. good rhyming though.
I'm sick and tired of you scrubs thinkin' you can Spit Game
Here, borrow my Washing Machine.. clean off those Shit Stains
this was not very good.
fuckin pussy.. you rap softer than the Blankets on my Bed
Learned so much from this loss that u're.. Thankin' me Instead
[b]not bad as a closer... the rap/wrap thing is played a bit but you added the blankets thing... so kinda original


basically just work on your wordplay and youll be set. and less played.
 
Old 07-10-04, 03:23 AM   #9
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Thanks for the votes guys, much appreciated.. Bumpin for a few more..
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Old 07-10-04, 03:33 AM   #10
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_Cass_
structure was wack...coulda been good, but that 1 stretched line through everything off...flow fell off cause of that 1 stretched line...no good metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

-Strype-
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some nice metas...wordplay was pretty good...most of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Overall
-Strype- had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and more personals...so basing off of that...ima say -Strype- ripped _Cass_ a new asshole without usin lube...

VOTE - -STRYPE-

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...
 
Old 07-10-04, 06:35 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
...ima say -Strype- ripped _Cass_ a new asshole without usin lube...


lol@Mim^ that's disturbing.



anyhow, uppin for 1 more vote.. hopefully..

thanks folks.
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Old 07-10-04, 08:06 PM   #12
gunit101.
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return the favor on my battle with truth aka ... its a punchline so it takes like a minute to vote.
 
Old 07-10-04, 08:58 PM   #13
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Cass: hmmm.......well your opener wasn't good at all you already
said two of the same words (words that are not common) in 2 lines
thats not a good idea deducted points for that incident...........
your punches weren't hard at all im sorry but I'm just saying what
I think...........originality/creativity was most definitely nor whack
nor ill it was just decent at best..............................................
your flow was not well done because the opener fucked the entire
thing up for you seriously......................................... ...........
syllable was fucked again due to the way off opener sorry.........


Strype: hmmmm........well your opener was pretty straight forward
I was liking it my opinion of course..........................................
punches overall were pretty good most of them connected really
well in the drop.I give ya props for that and added points.............
originality/creativity hmmm......it was pretty good I was seeing
SOME original lines going in there..................................
flow was very good syllable was close together again so thats nice

vote goes to: Strype due to the fact he took every category.....

do a honest vote on my battle links in the signature Hotshh! .vs. me aight?
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