HOOK
AYO~SAY MAH WAYS~cause i'll leave u dazed in raged stuck in my lryical maze//
SAY MAH WAYS~mashed it these fashist cats which feel to come for the me they better purchase a casket//
SAY MAH WAYS~for the people who see throw these peeps who act thug here on the street they different pepull(people)//

verse 1
i'm incrediable~the inevatable hetro~sexual geuss u all hatin on what u see wit me an my pedistall~what u bring the hate witta beef u fuckin cock suckas stop fuckin wit breedz//
the tell me to elivate~my styles rythmes together like constructed temple made for homemade playmate daggers~thrown by these faggots get me to dodgin in rappin the haters hatin becomin a habbit//
then fuckin blueprint~laughin out loud to mah shit~question on this they say *nuff sed* like its fuckin me startin tha shit//
like its my fault they strugglin readin mah shit~fuckin read quicker to find i'm sicker than a nigga sellin a brick fora snickers(choc bar)~bigger than the quickest lyrists~take the fuckin blueprint back up onto drawin board for every time that they snigger//
picture me inside ur wildest dream~my wackest rythme still levertates as a mildest pheon~i mean its mean to cream these cats for what they say they see//
i rape women~they ain't feelin mah seman~double team em wit jesus the reasons of why i'ma a Hyphen~to many of mah demons screamin of peerin of into a womens bed jus to see how much the bitch can keep bleedin//
my mother hated my~shes taken me shaken me aching to a trembled me wet the bed cause i'm scared to breath//
what the fuck ur faced beef on the streets~ur gangster well thanks ur propaly one of them bitchs who kicked me nearly killed for the shoes on mah feet//


HOOK
AYO~SAY MAH WAYS~cause i'll leave u dazed in raged stuck in my lryical maze//
SAY MAH WAYS~mashed it these fashist cats which feel to come for the me they better purchase a casket//
SAY MAH WAYS~for the people who see throw these peeps who act thug here on the street they different pepull(people)//


verse 2
mix these things~witnessed mind raped dreams~going to hell~turnin stronger than the devil for mah sins//
ain't one of them cats who cares about wins~i like to battle its usaully new to me but mah rap battle needs help~how can i win a battle itself~i'm strugglin with the fuck demoan roamin mah head//
ur throat closed~u hoes know ur dien if i need coke smoked its like air that i breave fired every nine to five~i kill foe's,hoe's faggots to get me some green//
2 lines of coke as mah nose snotes(snorts)~mah heart provokes the soul to go an let me blow mah hope of ever amounting to anything worth seeing mah hope floats like this dope smoke that i breath//
i want peace~kill these religous peeps an let the hate run free~see i keep contradicted meself~addicted to help~conlficted with meth~pick apart small parts of mah heart its start to the failing support of mah health//
let these teenage girls suck mah meat~12 to 14 is the desired age to fuck at mah will then mesarge mah feet~see i'm fuckin sick like desease~better of wen deceased till tha judgment day dooms the everafter life left for breedz//
i'm like mad cow~to fuckin bad for the beef//


HOOK
AYO~SAY MAH WAYS~cause i'll leave u dazed in raged stuck in my lryical maze//
SAY MAH WAYS~mashed it these fashist cats which feel to come for the me they better purchase a casket//
SAY MAH WAYS~for the people who see throw these peeps who act thug here on the street they different pepull(people)//

ok. nice concept...decent wordplay...no real multies...but damn son...work on your structure, but yo...nice spit. 7.5/10

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