verse due by midnight wednesday.. 10linezz.. regular rules...

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Ur rapstyle is garbage, and its my turn to take the trash out/
Pulled the gat out, cuz Ur mom told me to let more than just the cat out/
In every aspect of life, my style'll beat U flat out/
Verbaly abuse Genicide so much, he'll hyperventalate and pass out/
the only reason U dick riding still, is cuz I left U wit a smashed mouth/
cuz bullets and mushroom clouds surpass stereo, and surround sound Ur house/
Tell that bitch in Ur avature that Im about to profoundly pound her spouce/
Call all emergancy numbers listed, heres the yellow pages...dont leave the swat team out/
Cuz someonce gonna have to carry Gen' , and bodygaurd him through the laughing crowd/
ten lines, one for each life of this nigga that I snuffed out, plus one more for not having the ballz to state were hes from/

alright, its ur turn to emberass urself, cuz Im done. (=:

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My Lines Are ILL yo

no, U did try, and Ur garbage just like I said. Ur useing the same I did'nt try bullshit that Ur boy Spul used on me. lets see wat happends though.

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ok sorry man i aint tryin to start no beef.. but i really didnt try.. but we cool

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Iv got enouf niggaz trying to get at me already in this site, so yeah ma bad kid. but U shouldnt frunt, beef is the best thing that ever came to freestyle battling. It makes niggaz bring out they best material to the table when shit is started, but yeah we kewl.

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aiyo....eyedentdy takes this one flat out. your verse was ill man. da lines about da yellow pages and da surround sounds stereo were really dope and caught my eye right away. keep up da good work son.

drop an honest vote on da battles below...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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<marquee>"Real lyricists don't even respect you or take you serious. It's not that we don't like you, we hate you, PERIOD."</marquee>

mc riot im not hating but did u even read my verse.. mine at least flowed

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My Lines Are ILL yo

your ryme did flow but, to me, dat was all it did. Im not saying this as ur opponent, I just think U should encorporate more creativity into the "way" U say Ur lines. Usually thats why most of my lines might appeare to be so stretched, becuz I go overboard and get too creative. I aint hating either, U could be good at this shit if U "tried" U know.

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how come Riots vote got disqualified, I understood it perfect, thats the usual format isnt it.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Ur rapstyle is garbage, and its my turn to take the trash out/
Pulled the gat out, cuz Ur mom told me to let more than just the cat out/
In every aspect of life, my style'll beat U flat out/
Verbaly abuse Genicide so much, he'll hyperventalate and pass out/

startin ur battle out like dat is the stupidest thing i have seen in awhile, u couldnt really recover, u had one good bar i think

bitch, you think ur hot call urself edentdy
ur not stable cause genicide rips ya mentally
your 19 but still playing around on a rap message board
but ur getting merked by young en'z 2-4 is your record..
your hobbies are having sex but we know your a virgin
and when the votes hit we know genicide is emergin..
you think your hardcore cause ur originally from new york
just like 50 you love men like a fat kid loves PORK...
im gonna end this battle saying i didnt really try cause ur wack
and that genicide just made u 2-5 nigga and thats a fact

not great but had all da essentials flow, punches, and some orignaility...

Vote Genicide

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ok flow genicide eyedenty ur flow sucks ur wack usin the same word 2 make shit rhyme
vocab eyedetdy both could use work though
structure by far genecide e ur structure sucks uneven lines stretched lines work on that
punches genecide i think he hit harder and he had a personal so
vote genecide

thats kewl, Ur not looking at the shit I said rather what it looks like but oh well, thanx for voting any way will a peer. hay gen, I dont think roop actually voted, he just wrote and diped.? fuck it, w/e right.

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no i read it i just feel ur punches flow and structure sucked