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1.Battle
IP: C80D 465C
(Chours 2X)
who wants to battle me? lets take it to the battle floor im spittin so much game, you dont want ne more my ryhmes are hardcore, ill leave in so much pain cause so much damage to the brain, aint that insane? Verse 1 when you wanna battle me, dont even try me if you do, this is gonna be your worst tradady in your life, im warning you, this aint no joke if you come up to me dont even try to provoke i dont think you want your rapping carrear revoked when you battle me.... you cant even spit slap you with the pad, stab you wit the pen you write wit i spit wit vile, your best writ cant beat my freestyle you style? your is wack its suck a disgrace theres a place for your waste i cant even discribe the place but you have to face it cause thas the case and i put MC's in hospitals cause of the damage you may think im the underdog, but i got the advantage of winning against these other MC's im biggie, you punches are like his fans they miss me and yea im asian dont temp me or ill bring out bruce lee (CHOURS 2X) Verse 2 you have the courage to step, but i dont need to compete you have your mind set on beat, but im too elite im so hard to defeat, so you juss listen and take a seat i think you have leaks in you rhymes i spit knouckout, you only spit punchlines but thas fine, ill always be ill bring the excorsist, you still wont posses skill you never will, so you need to stop tryin sayin you the best, but we kno you lyin when lookin at me, no makin eye to eye i get up on stage wit confidence and pride you juss gotta recgonize , im the grand prize look at me then analyze, you could see the fire in my eyes when im done spittin, you realise you juss been beatin you feel the heat? thas my lyrics when i start to speak after battlein me, there was a misson that you have finnaly learned your lesson (Chours 3X) Please reply 1 out of 10, I kno it sucks |
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Odi et Amo
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IP: D55E 6F03
I liked it, your rhymes carried on on the next line, that was nice! Concept isn't original but that's ok. Flow was pretty good, vocab could be better. Some rhymes could be better but overall: it's ok! Give it a 6,5/10 (and that's good in my opinion, a 6 is good, a 7 is pretty nice, a 8 is real good, a 9 is close to perfection, a 10 is not possible
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