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Jefferson!!!…first of all why you battlin me
You think your whack rhymes rattle me
Just for battlin me I’ma put bullets on ya chest like a Washington throwback
Heat you up like a bullet from da mack
Wit my rhymes I’m like a gun to ya head
It’s my job to make you dead
My punchlines ain’t the shit and yours ain’t either
Stick my blade in you and watch you bleed out so much blood that it could fill up a liter
Bust you over da head while beers still in my beaker
And kill you by makin you choke on a sneaker

sorry guy thought you didnt show

your pathetic rhymes are sly and a joke/
the verses you write'll leave you high and broke/
they all come out dry and choked/
kinda gurgle when i slice your throat/
now that i think about it ill stop and gloat.../
get your attention, make you drop the remote/
chop you up then hop a boat ready to drop the load/
when i find a swarm of sharks now your sleepin low/
it takes nothing to surive your onslaught/
you still aint comin explosive even with that bomb you bought/

uppin this shit

could this get some votes?

uppin.... drop a good explained vote and drop a link to your battle and ill vote

awww.. a newbie battle... good battle tho dont get me wrong... jefferson came at it a lil bit harder with better punches, personals and structure was a little better.. both of yall need to elevate tho, need to stretch out your lines and shit.. make it longer.. it was a good battle tho with jefferson gettin my vote but both of you did well... good battle

VOTE- Jefferson

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131036

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