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i found a poem i made in school...War-Torn Vicious
IP: E3CA 7CA2
...This is the story of a soldier in Vietnam...A soldier in the midst of conflict tells of the moments leading up to his inevitable end...
~Blood trickles from the lifeless body of a fallen comrade Casualty of combat, but for myself I wouldn't want that So I keep an extra arm strapped, ready to split a cong's back They're rushing from the South, my team is movin to intercept We'd rather die fightin than hide n go home as injured vets Gunshots; crimson liquid shoots from an enemy viet's chest But my team is hit, turn my head and see only 3 men left I reload behind a dirt mound, I've got a vengeful thirst now Get up n fire at the first man in sight; hear a *splurt* sound Got to go to work now, there's only 4 enemies standing My team's tossin grenades *BOOM*... no more enemies standing We proceed through the bushes to where the enemy's camping Set fire to the tents; i love the way the embers be dancing No time to be captivated, fools get decapitated Reincarnated; soldiers considered dead are back to spray shit A spray of bullets buzzing, two of my three comrades falling I dive quickly and stay hidden, yet it seems combat's calling My last man's down, feels like I've failed my duties as a soldier *Click* *Click*, the HK5's empty, I strap it to my shoulder Close to my position, pull the Mark .23 out the holster "It's time that I roast ya," I scream as I emerge from the spot Put holes in two, the others fire; It seems I'm burned with a shot My stomaches draining, my time is here...won't be dying alone Pull out grenades and toss 'em up; Smoke every guy in the zone I'm laying lifeless; The beginning of my soul's ascension Feel a tear on my cheek; life is black in a moment's instant... ...A few day's after the war has ended, the fallen soldier's younger brother is given the news... ...Slow n' timid, a soldier walkin to my door carryin a box Keeps varyin his talks, tellin me you needa be buried,- it shocks Gettin scarier thoughts, now I gotta call the family, break the news Filled wit hate n' bruised, I was with you but now cant deface the truth Take the youth, I shoulda took the clip, you had a life to live A wife to give, all that hopeful shit, Im sayin I got the strife to quit Might be quick, tears are flowin but you know i'll get back kid Showed me the actions, hard to say, but I gotta put my bro in a casket Holdin me back quik, needa release this anger, put a clip to a cong I did you so wrong, but Ima do ya right and put ya shit to a song Dipped to go on, this must be a first cuz you always jus talk back Lost in the soft crap, you're a hero now, imagine, you been called that Its a small fact, heard about ya strength n' honor from this tall cat Man this halls packed, at ya funeral kid, pics of ya face on the wall tacked But mom's still cryin, shes tryna be strong n' look back on the good times Its bad but we should try, to find the light even tho we stood blind Ya girl really looks nice, if ya worried man, Ima help care for ya seed Been bearin my knees, I cant pray to god we needa be sharin a speech Darin to see, if I can do somethin decent with my life, am I worth it I been hurt kid, Im gonna stop grievin and remember nothin in life is worthless... made this last year for history... |
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It's nice
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IP: E198 D20B
That's from Paid In Full huh?
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
from paid in full? what are you talking bout...
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The Light
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IP: 9EB8 D17E
wow.. that was amazing... big ups to you
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
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He's talkin about where Cam'ron pulls the dude out of the car in your vid. display at the bottom. That is from the movie "Paid In Full" i've seen it also..
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IP: 3240 794D
oh...never seen that movie....
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