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Old 06-21-04, 03:15 PM   #1
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i found a poem i made in school...War-Torn Vicious

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...This is the story of a soldier in Vietnam...A soldier in the midst of conflict tells of the moments leading up to his inevitable end...

~Blood trickles from the lifeless body of a fallen comrade
Casualty of combat, but for myself I wouldn't want that
So I keep an extra arm strapped, ready to split a cong's back
They're rushing from the South, my team is movin to intercept
We'd rather die fightin than hide n go home as injured vets
Gunshots; crimson liquid shoots from an enemy viet's chest
But my team is hit, turn my head and see only 3 men left
I reload behind a dirt mound, I've got a vengeful thirst now
Get up n fire at the first man in sight; hear a *splurt* sound
Got to go to work now, there's only 4 enemies standing
My team's tossin grenades *BOOM*... no more enemies standing
We proceed through the bushes to where the enemy's camping
Set fire to the tents; i love the way the embers be dancing
No time to be captivated, fools get decapitated
Reincarnated; soldiers considered dead are back to spray shit
A spray of bullets buzzing, two of my three comrades falling
I dive quickly and stay hidden, yet it seems combat's calling
My last man's down, feels like I've failed my duties as a soldier
*Click* *Click*, the HK5's empty, I strap it to my shoulder
Close to my position, pull the Mark .23 out the holster
"It's time that I roast ya," I scream as I emerge from the spot
Put holes in two, the others fire; It seems I'm burned with a shot
My stomaches draining, my time is here...won't be dying alone
Pull out grenades and toss 'em up; Smoke every guy in the zone
I'm laying lifeless; The beginning of my soul's ascension
Feel a tear on my cheek; life is black in a moment's instant...

...A few day's after the war has ended, the fallen soldier's younger brother is given the news...

...Slow n' timid, a soldier walkin to my door carryin a box
Keeps varyin his talks, tellin me you needa be buried,- it shocks
Gettin scarier thoughts, now I gotta call the family, break the news
Filled wit hate n' bruised, I was with you but now cant deface the truth
Take the youth, I shoulda took the clip, you had a life to live
A wife to give, all that hopeful shit, Im sayin I got the strife to quit
Might be quick, tears are flowin but you know i'll get back kid
Showed me the actions, hard to say, but I gotta put my bro in a casket
Holdin me back quik, needa release this anger, put a clip to a cong
I did you so wrong, but Ima do ya right and put ya shit to a song
Dipped to go on, this must be a first cuz you always jus talk back
Lost in the soft crap, you're a hero now, imagine, you been called that
Its a small fact, heard about ya strength n' honor from this tall cat
Man this halls packed, at ya funeral kid, pics of ya face on the wall tacked
But mom's still cryin, shes tryna be strong n' look back on the good times
Its bad but we should try, to find the light even tho we stood blind
Ya girl really looks nice, if ya worried man, Ima help care for ya seed
Been bearin my knees, I cant pray to god we needa be sharin a speech
Darin to see, if I can do somethin decent with my life, am I worth it
I been hurt kid, Im gonna stop grievin and remember nothin in life is worthless...

made this last year for history...
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Old 06-24-04, 11:13 AM   #2
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It's nice
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Old 06-24-04, 11:13 AM   #3
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That's from Paid In Full huh?
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Old 06-24-04, 11:23 AM   #4
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from paid in full? what are you talking bout...
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Old 06-24-04, 02:32 PM   #5
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wow.. that was amazing... big ups to you
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Old 06-24-04, 04:59 PM   #6
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He's talkin about where Cam'ron pulls the dude out of the car in your vid. display at the bottom. That is from the movie "Paid In Full" i've seen it also..
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Old 06-24-04, 05:51 PM   #7
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oh...never seen that movie....
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