rules are:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3 bars only
20 mins to spit (to check over for corrections)
no hate/crew votes
no recycling
no biting
i'll set up
spit within time limit no one goes first.
sorry if ima lil late im eatin right now

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blah! lil boy what you be trippin' over my illness in these rhymes//
you couldn't come up with up with ten damn wins if you flipped a dime//
(10 wins=dime=10cents)

you can only move to the right or left never up like scientific notation//
kid you couldn't get me shook if you spit in a mic and let out vibration//

you got'z Tupac lyrics in your goddamn signature but you ain't on the top//
you couldn't get your dick sucked if you stopped at a fuckin' head shop//
(head=ya know suck dick)

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Dis bitch the Immortal Souljah thinkin hes Synonyms n Enternal like H.O.V.A?
Your HOVA bitch n OVA spreadin Babies buttcheeks enjoyin playin "Red-Rova"
Im huntin this bitch like the "Hunt for Red October..' pussy whip move Over
Reason in the mirror i look on my shoulder n only see the Head of a Soldier
My lines are yo ultimate fill either label em pointley "Ill" or its jus "Skill"
Dis 120lb cracker popped "Trips-Pills" n fell givin me another body bag to fill
dis milk i can spoil dis bitch sparked off his boys "Crack" wit jus Aluminum Foil n Oil! (LOL)
3 Bars is more than yo Limit drop the keyboard n 8 Mile DVD you cant Finish
Shaq has mo "Skillz" midget drop dead bitch flints only Diminish n "20-Minutes
hurdlin dis bitch ova a Catapault dis isnt a battle some1 charge me for assault
ima keep droppin bars from my "Vault" n watch this kid greener den da Hulk
Start to finish i had this win one open yo eyes bitch der slanted serve mo dim som
your a lil too baked n "Overdone.." only time you spit is from another cats Rectum..

Holla back

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

Top 3 Battles Currently Needin Votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127742
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127560

i thought the rules was Maximum 20 lines i didnt see yo post bout 3 barz thats hella small, add onto yours n join it together, peace..

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

Top 3 Battles Currently Needin Votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127742
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127560

Bar Length is fine, bars are bars uppin fo some honest votes wit some honest love, lets get this shit closed...

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

Top 3 Battles Currently Needin Votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127742
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127560

uppin for votes holla back with both critiscm n honest votes, peace

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

Top 3 Battles Currently Needin Votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127742
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127560

ok added a couple bars to match up a lil.....

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Dats Ill enough fo me, good add lets get some votes...

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

Top 3 Battles Currently Needin Votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127742
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127560

Upppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 4 Vvvvvvoooottttteeeeeeesssss

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lil trip gotz this battles, he used better vocabulary, His punchs hit harder, also rhyme'd alot more. YOu both was alrite tho, lil trip gotz my vote tho.

v/lil trip

return tha favor and vote on one of tha battles in my sig. Peace

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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!and leave links!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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ummm i think soulja got this due to the fact that trip just said some pretty random shit... lol coulndt follow it to well and it made me wanan stop readin a lil bit.,.. no beef, ya'll both did ya thang but i just gotta go wit soulja cause his was more interesting...

v/soulja

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...743#post1357743
drop an honest one (you cant vote trip, cause ur in it :P)

much appreciated

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

He can vote either way, drop the opinion peace...

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

Top 3 Battles Currently Needin Votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127742
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127560

Lil-trip
structure was fucked...all of ur lines were stretched...flow was wack as hell, mainly because of ur structure...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...u didnt have very many punches, some of it was just completely random and pointless...but the punches u did have barely connected, and some didnt connect at all...a few personals were attempted...

Immortal_Souljah04
structure wasnt very good...ur lines were also stretched quite a bit...ur flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good as well...some of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
both had some metas...and both had pretty good wordplay...neither had a good structure...and neither had a stable flow...Souljah had more punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...ImmortalSouljah gets my vote...

VOTE - IMMORTAL_SOULFHA04

Please return the favor on the link in my sig against TheOne