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06-27-04, 04:11 PM
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"Fuck the rules"-open mic...come spit
IP: DFDD 3A5C
fuck tha rules, I'mma spit'a open mic, you might not like, my verses, but they collaborate/ with whatcha learnin'/ my mic-stands burnin', wid tha heat on fire, if I spit any weaker, I'd be subsided, or ignored..fa my lack of skill, least I'm local spittin' flows, while you sound likah joke...I'm real, please feel me..if you can't, to bad, all you MCeez wanna be me/ but ya'll stink, like tha pussy unda' tha sheets...all you fags get beat! n Teddii is me, I shouldn't have'ta tell you twice, you be thinkin' I'm soft, but I own tha mic/ I got infinity lyricz ta spitta fight, at you, or ya war-tank, I givah fuck..alcohol be how my breath stankz..n you, you could smell it, givah damn if you die, at tha hands of'a thuggish felon/ I plug holez in ya melon/ n break every record ya label is sellin'...fa ya wack MCeez, come getta piece, I'll battle anybody on or off my streets...
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06-27-04, 04:23 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
i liked it, but could u seperate ur lines next time. this was nice though. i liked the flow n wordplay was nice 2. u pretty good for a newbie. keep up. peace
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06-27-04, 05:50 PM
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IP: CE8A A4D2
[COLOR=Blue] Yeah thanks man...lol I'm not a newbie dawg..I'm just a newbie to this site...I rapped before, I got 4 years experience with internet flowin'...I'm sorry about the linez, I tried to seperate them as best I could...but next time I'll space'em out more..hehe but thanks man...I appreciate you readin' my shit..
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