a'yo this hows it going down.....

5-10 bars
Up to 5 votes wins
3-0 is a knockout
No d/r,crew or hate votes
No feedin,bitin
After check in you spit 30 mins after that

ok goodluck to you man

well looks like i got to serve this one up on a silver platter wishin he can beat me but i dont think thats gonna happin im sorry that i got to do u like this four dicks u don suck already 5th comin on the way but im a be the sixth this gay ass dude cant even stand up right so much ass fuckin kept this fagget up all nite
ima murk this dude knock knock open up the door servin them up has arrived no runnin and hidin dont be surprised im a give what u been lookin for at the end of this battle we'll see who will have a 5-0 score

let the poll begin give a honest vote no ridin just ur truthful vote

iight iight immma drop my shit soon iight and the votes can begin

YEa here it comes mayn......

Yo I spit blazin lyriks that'll fry ya whole brain//
Ya lines that you think of prolly give ya head a strain//
But dont use gods name in vain just because you rap wack//
You knew I was gonna beat chu cuz i made ya vision turn black//
I see you from H-town but you really aint reppin//
Hoes town is where you live STDs is ya only weapon//
You got weak lyriks while my spits erupt//
This kids everyones bitch, he be servin~them~up//
I got complex vocab that dictionaries cant explain//
Ya rhymes are so simple that your words sound the same//
This mcs a nobody, look he got no avatar//
His lines run~on like he dosent know whats a bar//
You a new member but that dont even matter//
My punches hit you so hard, that they punctured your bladder//
You prayin to god to make you ill beggin to get blessed//
Yo why you spit so weak for? You should get ya mind checked//
I got a vocabulary larger than Michigan's Great lakes//
Send ya ass back home faster than over~the~sea~freights//
Yo you betta check who you challenging cuz imma make you pay//
I know you wanna back out so please dont delay//

iight i spit my stuff now UPP dem votes PLEASEEEE

this isn't a compatention yayo won this you corny servin them up

punches: the punches were no compatention yayo spit more diss towards servin
meta: metaphor from yayo were hot and from servin they just didn't make since
structure: yayo structure was better after every rhyme it change lines and servin i got lost with his shit
miltus: the rhyme from servin didn't cut it for me only two words rhyme for the whole thing
flow: yayo put more flow cause it was a lot better servin flow was like 30 secs long

iight im up 1-0 keep the votes comin now and dont sleep on this

yeah like Flip said....servin dem up's rhymes were way too basic and corny. your structure was off and dat made it hard to feel your shit homie. keep workin on dat shit tho u have some potential.
Yayo...i was feelin your verse man....your shit was pretty ill. i liked da basic punchlines all around and my fav line was "This mcs a nobody, look he got no avatar//
His lines run~on like he dosent know whats a bar/." i just felt that one all da way.
vote: YaYo


drop an honest vote on da battle below!! return da favor!

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Thanks mayn........im up 2-0 keep on votin and dont sleep on this battle iight so VOTE On UP

Structure: yayo
Flow: Tie
Punches: yayo
Personals: yayo
enjoyed: yayo


servin- 5/10
Yayo-6.5/10

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come on serve i think you should just quit this is like you 5 lose
Structure: yayo
Flow: yayo
Punches: yayo
Personals: yayo
opener: yayo
closer: yayo

one sided

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