**Welcome To My Life**

From hustling-to-jewelry, and using drugs-just-to-cure-me/
To roughed-up-by-security, and seeing judges-and-juries/
All of my life-was-just-purely, full of trifling-and-fury/
Until fighting-secured-me, of getting stripes-prematurely/
I went through hand-made-prisons, in man-made-systems/
That the man made strictly to appease the band-aid-victims/
Where gangs break kids-in, by slashin ya mans face chin-to-chin
And ya damn fate's-pinned-in, as those in command take-limb-swings/
I can't stand the stress-in-the-bars, where death-makes-it-hard/
To confess-when-ya-charged, of groping breasts-of-the-guards/
There's nothing left-but-ya-scars, when ya left-in-the-dark/
But a mess-in-your-heart, when ya madness-turns-to-sparks/
Regrets-in-your-soul, that more than suggest-like-a-crow/
You'll be laid to rest-in-a-hole, for stabbing chests-of-ya-P.O./
Only after death-you'll-be-known, as an artist like Van-Gogh/
And not just a John-Doe, with an empty X on tagged-toes/
What is more sad-though?
Then the concrete-life, where not only does heat-rise/
But it beats, slices, and executes you by your own devices/
I'll keep striving-and-living, when peace finds-me-in-heaven/
Until three-time-offenders, all get street-sign-remembrance/

feedback please

it was aight...i liked da concept...work on structure and flow...but overall it was tite...

was aight G...do ure thang...work on structure and try to make it so theres no stop and go...if that makes sense...to many - - - - ...confusing...6/10...was good tho

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"I didnt choose this life, this life chose me"

HONOR and RESPECT

i liked this shit...it was nice...nice multies and vocab...feelin the topic...shit was nice...7.5/10