aight mayne
rules iz:
5 to 30 linez
no d.r hate or crew votes
explaine votes
du 30 mins
U DROP FIRST
lets do this e/z nigga wun......

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checkin in ..
lets do this
nigga

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lets go nigga 20 mins left for u to spit..
lets goo...

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ok im gonna drop my verse.. its pretty wack tho...cause this battle was pretty unexpected.. no hate... gluck

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Da jokah he always gets his ass kicked when it comes to batman…
You act all hard cause you are a “yung killa” but u prolly just a fatman
Yeah that was a weak punch but not as u always talking about ur guns
Your rhymes are about as good as three church going choir nuns..
Yo ur 18-1 but you don’t battle vets… your still on a new b
Take me for example… 3-0 you can do better than a little white rookie
Soo im probably gonna get killed cause Im just a little white video gamer
But this nigga only talks about his weapons no punches what a flamer..
ur soo hardcore ur probably gonna end up in prison doing all the bending
Sooo all I have to say is im out… that was my one big ending…

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My Lines Are ILL yo

yo sorry i dropped so wack i can do better.. so if u ever want a rematch i will i just was kinda in a hurry for this. but i have no excuses soo just get it over with and merk me

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Genicide u aint shit nigga fuck Death Row....

now if i wuz a fiend,my block would tempt-me-binge,
aside from tha dead bodies,stuck wit n empty-ciringe,
we aint a shook-town,u aint from round here,u best look-down,
these r tha streets,
where we produce phat-beats,got tha hardest athletes,
runnin from tha c-cypha similar to track-meets,
some of ya close friends get locked up,
n if u aint payin attention...ya lil sista might get knocked up,
i'll make straight bitches outta u n ya goons,
cryin fa mommy cuz u cant handle tha gunshot wounds/
u can say u thug but i still dont believe-u,
death is like a motion picture n imma leave-u wit a sneak pre-view/
i cant believe u wanna test me afta u got beat by perm,
both ya rhymes wus elementry,cus i caught it on ya mid term/
tha hammas on my guns snap fasta then turtles,
have u feelin like u in tha olympics as a profeshinal for hurdles/
fuck guns i'll slam u down wit a cro-bar,
i'll take it easy on ya ass cuz u aint shit but a bitch so-far/
cus i keep my mac lit like a roman candle,
fire balls hittin ya face that u cant handle/
run by ya crib n flame kiss u wit tha torch,
burn ya grill george foreman style while u sittin on ya porch/
i'll feed u a pound n i aint talkin bout wings,
leave wholes in ya face tha size of onion rings/
but my bullets consist of high coles-ter-ol,
so if u lookin to lower yours u should get a vest-n-all/
cus i'll feed u a biskit but its bad for ya di-et,
i gave u advice tha line b4 n i think u should try-it/
me n my crew will stalk ya like tha pop-era-zzi,
get a face to face interview den pop-some-shots be/
now ya photo graph is in a paper unda tha obituaries,

e.z nigga wun....

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aight mayne uppin htis muh fuckah dont sleep
and chek ma otha battles in ma sig to aight niggas wun...

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alright no hate jokah but this verse has to be pre written.. none of the punches hit me they could hit anybody.. and whats this line about..i cant believe u wanna test me afta u got beat by perm,
both ya rhymes wus elementry,cus i caught it on ya mid term/
what or who is perm???? well anyway lets up this

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My Lines Are ILL yo

na b it ment that yur a white boi tryna be black so u get perms and they beat u..get it good
uppin this shit dont sleep.....

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da jokah it was good very good too good for a free and pretty long for a free too plus you went over your rules it was 31 when you said 30 thats a no no. But the actual lines were ok nice personals and punches also nice flow style was ok. your best line was: but my bullets consist of high coles-ter-ol,
so if u lookin to lower yours u should get a vest-n-all/ but can i asume that your really fat cause the whole thing was was about food.

Genicide it was good you definally fell from your previous shit but still good. um the style was changed which i didn't like but the lines itself was good better punches and personnal (probably cause it wasn't all about food) which means the hole thing was better even though it was really short. best line wasa jokah he always gets his ass kicked when it comes to batman…
You act all hard cause you are a “yung killa” but u prolly just a fatman

vote genicide

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aight this was a pretty tight battle from both of yall... Jokah and Gen came pretty hard when it came to punches and personals and shit... there werent many multis from either of you... Gen's verse was tight, his flow was on lock and he had his rhyme scheme down...
no hate tho to jokah, u had a nice drop too hommie but i think Gen took this one... remember no hate brotha, just the way it goes some times...

VOTE- GEN

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damn

da Jokah: i feel u on that gangsta shit but it aint workin in text fo real........it aint finna work........ur structure was horrid.....good flow...good personals...ok punches...this shit was pretty nice but ive seen much better too u...ok vocab

Gen: ur shit was aiight....some shit didnt make sense but it was nice...sick personals...ok punches........flow was good...structure was bad...

overall: genicide

drop an honest vote on my battle now sno

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aight....this was close.

Da jokah u had alot more verse. But it was a lil choppy an strecthed. sum nice lines in it tho.

Genicide. Ur's was alot shorter in lines but lengthier in bars. your's flowed alot better wit the same quality of punches an personal's....

Ima have to go wit genicide...based on the flow factor. nice work guys.

ayo drop an honest vote here. thanks

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