10-20 lines
no feedin
no hate
no crew
no d/r

i set it up u go first dawg

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chcekin

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East Miles

dawg u got to spit first man i told you im trying to rap up my currewnt battle

the computer shut down thas why i took so long

Checkin


Dog u Xplicit, nah you need to change ya name,
my ryhmes is xplicit plus im good in the game,
nigga whos really xplicit,
i set up the battle n still went 1st,
im playin the feild ya bitch ass on turf
Dog im a real nigga not to metion im nice,
My rhymes so hot they burnh ya throat like sprite
Ima do to u like the killer did to 2 pac,
fuck ripin u ima murk u and make u feel like u been hit wit 2 glocks
Its murkz in ya hood but i dont need to strapped up,
just call this battle a mummy cuz is bout to be wrapped up
dog like i said ya name xplicit but dont ever try to rise to me,
dig u bitch made,
change ya name to parental advisory

yeah,

It's the Xplicit one back again like Juelz Santana/
Bringing murderous flows to cause a lyrical vendetta//

I may lose one battle but, I still got 3 rounds/
To bounce back like Juvenile, trying to grab a rebound//

So let me butcher this battle, droppin lyrical bombs where it most hurt/
And when the smoke clears, we'll see who really got murked//

Im at my peak position you can call it my climax/
And give examples with more showings than the theater Imax//

Let me assassinate this nigga take steps, never informal/
Word of advise, you cant murk xplicit cause im lyrically inmortal//

I'm fully equipped with more techs than recieved by Rasheed Wallace b/
Slay niggas at all cost thats my policy//

And make sure you change your name, cause murkz just got exploited/
In other words, I used your name in lots of ways and I destroyed it//

Another homicide, come on aint no stopping me/
Once again its Xplicit the king of hip-hop philosophy//

~one xplicit

word up man battle is wrapped up but hey still uppin for votes man
~one xplicit

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word so im guessing that you looked at my rhymes saw how hot they were and decided to change yours huh? thats a real bitch move man you know that right. Cause it never said you can change your garbage rhymes in the rules dawg so y u cheating? Man i tell you people cant even battle honestly these days.

~one Xplicit

MURKZ DROP:

Dog u Xplicit, nah you need to change ya name,
my ryhmes is xplicit plus im good in the game,
ok there first off change your name to something that fits
you kid....and 2nd line was self-glorification 2/10
nigga whos really xplicit,
i set up the battle n still went 1st,
ok a tip do not type any word 3 times besides "and" "it" and all the others that are most likely to be repeated but kid you said his name 3 times in 4 lines that's dumb...0/10
im playin the feild ya bitch ass on turf
Dog im a real nigga not to metion im nice,
kid.........1st line was a half-decent punch but....2nd line was self-glorification 1/10
My rhymes so hot they burnh ya throat like sprite
Ima do to u like the killer did to 2 pac,
weak 4/10
fuck ripin u ima murk u and make u feel like u been hit wit 2 glocks
Its murkz in ya hood but i dont need to strapped up,
don't rhyme at all plus its weak 2/10
just call this battle a mummy cuz is bout to be wrapped up
dog like i said ya name xplicit but dont ever try to rise to melike ya rhymes is mean,
second line too stretched and you said his name 4 TIMES NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 0/10
dog u bitch made,
change ya name to pg13
doesn't rhyme and its weak 0/10

overall: 1.5/10


Mc:Xplicit Drop:

It's the Xplicit one back again like Juelz Santana/
Bringing murderous flows to cause a lyrical vendetta//
hmm.....self-glorification again but nice flow 3/10
I may lose one battle but, I still got 3 rounds/
To bounce back like Juvenile, trying to grab a rebound//
another self-glorification nice flow tho 5/10
So let me butcher this battle, droppin lyrical bombs where it most hurt/
And when the smoke clears, we'll see who really got murked//
good didn't use a self-glorification line & the punch was pretty good 6.5/10
Im at my peak position you can call it my climax/
And give examples with more showings than the theater Imax//
hmm.... ok 6/10
Let me assassinate this nigga take steps, never informal/
Word of advise, you cant murk xplicit cause im lyrically inmortal//
2nd line self-glorification 1st line ok 5/10
I'm fully equipped with more techs than recieved by Rasheed Wallace b/
Slay niggas at all cost thats my policy//
decent flow decent punch 6/10
And make sure you change your name, cause murkz just got exploited/
In other words, I used your name in lots of ways and I destroyed it//
cool hot flow decent punch 7/10
Another homicide, come on aint no stopping me/
Once again its Xplicit the king of hip-hop philosophy//
don't use your name a lot & you'll be better 6/10

overall: 6/10 ( you take it)

do a honest vote on my battle links in the signature: hotshh! .vs. me

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FORSAKEN IS RIGHT MURK SHIT WAS WEAK
AND EXPLICIT SHIT WAS AIIGHT SO BASED ON THE STRUCTURE AND THE FLOW
I GIVE IT TO EXPLICIT
BUT Forsaken dog you may be beating me in votes but be for real

in the streets you wouldnt beat me/ i was battling 2 cats at once so that s my fault

for sleeping on you but truthfully stop acting like you a rap critic

YOU ARE WEAK! And we can do a rematch Public or Private, votes or no votes

i aint votin cuz murkz my boy...but ahahaha u fucked up his verse so badly...thats y some of the things aint rhyme, ahahaha

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Murkz
structure is good....flow is nice for the most part...no good metas...u attempted some wordplay, but it came out wack...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals...

Mc:Xplicit
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...but uhhh...structure is ok...u had some stretched lines though...flow fell off a little because of the stretchness...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals....

Overall
Murkz had the better structure...as well as the more stable flow...neither had good personals...Mc:Xplicit had more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Mc:Xplicit gets my vote...

VOTE - MC:XPLICIT

Xplicit was on point with the flow and structure, murkz you need to work on ya structure so that ya flow will be better. You even had a few lines that didnt rhyme like ya closer...you gotta finish off battles hard. I aint really think either of ya started out too hard. Both of ya did have some streched lines also, but Murkz was just all over the place with it. Drop some more multies in there, and some metas to show some creativity. Xplicit was just harder, and more consistent with what he was doin.

v/mc:xplicit