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Im in............................who spits first............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................

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Look dawg, ma shits monumental, ma rhymes are so perpetual that it drives bitches mental....
Ur rhymes are so ilegible, that when i read ur shit, i thought it was in fuckin morse code...
Dawg after this, yo broke ass is gua be spellbound, an ima have anotha win unda ma belt...
Shit, im goin to hell now...
Or tha penetentiary, cause ma chemistry a fuckin crime..
But yo weak ass shit isnt evn worth ova a fuckin dime..
An if i type ne mo this chumps gonna end up dyin...

yo wusup dawgm why didnt u battle?........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .

fucking n00b most of your lines didnt rhyme..
started fuckin a clock..
...............cus he though thats how peeps did time..
dnt show you record bcus your scared of all the loses..
he's a chef?
.....so it proves Salad aint the only thing he toses..
bring shades man because im bringin the heat..
you bring..
............................the win so i serve defeat..
peeps red your check of ............ and were already bored to death..
im holdin on to your lungs..
................will it be death? yup cus someones holdin your breath..
like your avy you just play the same old shit..
threw 10 lines..
i would say you bit from a vet,but 10lines down and none of it hit..

seriously 5minuet kestyle bcus im off bed got work soon..
G'luck and Vote and leave a link ill hit it up and..
pz.

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Hmmm....not close.

Rascal Takes this in all acounts....
Punches-wordplay-flo-personal's and metiphores....

Pretty handily infact.
Best Line.
dnt show you record bcus your scared of all the loses..
he's a chef?
.....so it proves Salad aint the only thing he toses..

pretty good shit.....
Joval- focus more on your opponent when you verse. It will make your punches more direct thus harder. No hate. Just work on alot of that.

Vote/Rascal
Drop an honest vote on the battle's in my sig. Thanks.

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Okay if anyone wants to battle pm me 2-5 means nothing lol......I'm actually a king....Anyway I think Rascal got this easily Malofic said enuff

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Joval8
structure is wack...over half of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchness...no good metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

RASCAL
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Overall
RASCAL had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...ima say RASCAL tore Joval8 a new asshole without usin lube.

VOTE - RASCAL

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

bump leave links i do return the favor..
pz.

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I did and you didnt

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joval no hate but ur verse was pretty wack, u need serious work on ur punches n wordplay it was pretty basic

rascal u took this battle on every aspect n ur vers was aight

keep elevating......
v-rascal

drop 1 on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062

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