I need to know homie if you is a real fuckin' gangsta/
cuz we all know that when Young come around niggaz put them thangs up/
i know how shit went in washington but i got me a rifle/
but i get respect from Vicelords to BlackStones but i'ma Disciple/
False flaggin' niggaz they will get murked fast/
i'm holdin' figures and if i'm not then they in a bag/
talkin' shit but i don't hear you fags givin' each other brain/
i ain't say shit to you so i ain't gonna mention no names/
cuz some niggaz is just a waist of time/
but when they talk too much shit then they crossed the line/
but when i'm listenin' or readin' somebody elses shit/
i'm grippin' the tek wit while i'm loadin' the clip/
man these niggaz crazy and the way they flow is wack/
niggaz call me warren sapp cuz i got two nines on my back/
and they say i'm like a plumber cuz i come wit the crack/
and you don't know who the fuck we is Folk/
now watch when i'm done some nigga tries to freepost/
and i've seen most shit like that happen/
cuz we Tha Killah's so don't talk shit or we get to clappin'....

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yo u really gotta work on ya structure and vocab pc

now dont go and flip out i'm just droppin honest feedback

i know homie i wasn't gonna even flip out.

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well normaly u start fuck this fuck that u gotta get some battles fa real win some then try out for anutha crew cause u said u wanted outta tha killas

Get some feedback please!!!!

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