id like some feed Back on this verse please


Sit back and watch as i spit this verse.
My rhymes hit make sick its my curse
and i spit it aint my worse.
but ill still give you tha left and tha right
ill sit here chill and rhyme all night.
cuz im incerdible. unconpetable.
ill show you tha defaniton onf skill in one line.
n you can't do it in you hole life time thats fine.
i know im better. and your bitch ill get her.
and ill set tha standers. rite now im more chipper tha flanders
im set to flow. n for all i know. my voice is ready to go.
i bring your FAMILY shame. cuz to you this is just a game.
for me its a passage to fame.
ill spit this shit till i hit my clip. ill sink your ship.
and thats it im out. i hope you liked it give me a shout

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble