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Rising Sun 3 37.50%
Gods son 5 62.50%
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Old 06-23-04, 11:18 AM   #1
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Rising Sun..Vs God's Son..

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aight you know the rules..
15 lines max..
spit first by 12
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Old 06-24-04, 11:31 AM   #2
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yo sry for being so inconvenient but i balled all day and my friend came over so i couldnt drop. today, im going to battlegrounds at toronto so ill drop when i get back im really sry but if u wanna give me the loss thats fine although u arent getting anything out of it.
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Old 06-24-04, 01:34 PM   #3
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yo i'll give you till friday at noon...


















if not you are DQ'd
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Old 06-25-04, 12:19 PM   #4
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k checking in.....let me type it up my bad man....im a busy person
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Old 06-25-04, 01:26 PM   #5
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iight you can spit first ..............
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Old 06-25-04, 01:39 PM   #6
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i got five more lines and i will be done sorry man,......................
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Old 06-25-04, 01:57 PM   #7
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Your polluting this industry like SUVs
It’s best-you-leave cause your identity’s-deceived
If your God’s son…
I’m gonna let-you-see why nobody’s gonna celebrate Christmas-Eve
Get realistic-please, it’s easy to tell-your-fake
Dwell-your-fate into thinking that hell’s-the-place for you-to-go
Stop lying, you died many years ago
To beat me, you need a miracle bigger than your resurrection
Get to my recollection, many differences as you cannot get-affection
Nor are you a remedy to my ill-skilled infection
Your far from perfection, a contradiction from what your disciples-claimed
You have a psycho-brain to call yourself “God’s son”, your a disgrace-to-God
Stab you with-a-cross and piss on the altar if you were actually divine
Nobody “sees” how good you are, so you haven’t “cured-the-blind”
Giving me a loss for a no show, prophets aren’t down-with-that
If Jesus ever rapped, I hope that he would never sound-this-bad
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Old 06-25-04, 02:04 PM   #8
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Rising SON..i got shocking news for you..all this time i've been your daddy//
Scored a one in hole (my dick) or hole in one...bitch i'm the golfer, you my fuckin caddy//
Finally after 4 days of you not spittin, i'm attackin like a raptor i'm vince carter//
Just with ya mom last while she was screamin "oh baby come on and fuck me harder"//
I shouldve just take the win sice you never bothered for 4 days to even show
But i'm gonna Rise up and hit you, and throw a couple of 'bows//
claim ta kill punches from Grace "N"ine "B"ullets "C"ocked and aim at will//(will n grace)
shame-ya-drilled my mettah-kills(medical) shock this dumbass more than retards exchanging-pills//
try and take-it-and-stop-me let him tell u he rich, but he like a cheatin game player he's only fakin a yacht-see//(yahtcee)
the stakes are too hot-b my punches like hitler to your eyes , one jab'll make him a not-see//(nazi)
Like masterbating next to ya mom...Im hard to cum by///(surpass my level)
Kickin ya off quick cuz you just irritatin on my nuts like ya gums & ''tongues dry''//
Now the times are being rearranged and changed its time to make room for The Vet
Its over cant you see that you lost and this Suns about to set??//
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Old 06-25-04, 02:04 PM   #9
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nice spit you got some talent lets leave it up to the votes...
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Old 06-25-04, 03:10 PM   #10
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this battle was pretty one sided yall... gods ripped ya apart... no hate tho but this is how i see it... rising sun didnt rhyme nearly enough, most of your lines didnt rhyme hommie and thats a must, ya gotta rhyme, so basicly gods wins by default right there... but GODS came real hard in this battle with punches personals and the flow was on lock... this one was over before it began...

VOTE- GODS
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Old 06-25-04, 07:42 PM   #11
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yo gods son just to let you kno it takes forever to get votes so im getting honest votes from other people. peace....
heres an example

LyriclMenace: u rap?
Mike12Ikeda: ya
Mike12Ikeda: who is this
Mike12Ikeda: yo u there
LyriclMenace: yeah
Mike12Ikeda: u from rb?
LyriclMenace: yeah
Mike12Ikeda: haha nice why'd u ask if i rapped then
LyriclMenace: cuz i added u to my list but i forgot y
Mike12Ikeda: jw
Mike12Ikeda: yo u wanna vote honestly on one of my battles...and i will return the favour with an HONEST vote
LyriclMenace: nah,im not registered at the original rb
LyriclMenace: im on relaunched
Mike12Ikeda: same
LyriclMenace: link me then
Mike12Ikeda: even if u say im wack i wont be offended so dont worry
Mike12Ikeda: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131179
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Old 06-25-04, 11:36 PM   #12
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damn we got some trouble.....
that was a terrrible battle.. and my main problem was your newbish structure....
both of you.. sure Gdos son is new but you all need to elevate... hopefully you will


but anyway...

godson
ur lines were horribly strecthed and this really fucked ur structure to hell....
your punchlines were connecting like a blind boxer( sparcley )
your actually lucky u had one good punchline...
but

Rising SON..i got shocking news for you..all this time i've been your daddy//
Scored a one in hole (my dick) or hole in one...bitch i'm the golfer, you my fuckin caddy//
never use that line or anything like it again it was wack

overall *3*


rising

u had strecthed lines to ya vers ewas on the verdge of being wack..
to mee this battle was on sided... you won becuz of just harder
hitting punches... witch still hit weak.. u cannot do this against an experienced batteler
and when i say this im only saying this to help ya not offend ya...
overall *5.6*

my vote obviously rising sun for just better punches alone
with out this u woulndt ahve won
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Old 06-25-04, 11:41 PM   #13
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this battle was pretty good but rising sun won this one real quick

gods son your lines were way to stretched and they werent really working for me..
punchlines were iight but some of them didnt really make that much sense...personals were really good and thats basically all you had.....your flow was way off it sorta changed in the middle so i wonder.....but overall your verse was iight but your structure was way off and you really need to work on that...

rising sun... damn son you had a nice verse .. you had some nice punchlines .. you had okay personals but they werent really that good...mutlies were decent..flow was really good and it was really merking god's son....overall you had a nice verse and this is the reason why you won good battle

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Old 06-25-04, 11:58 PM   #14
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ok wiinner rise by far way better drop

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Your polluting this industry like SUVs
It’s best-you-leave cause your identity’s-deceived

nice 8/10

consitant verse

To beat me, you need a miracle bigger than your resurrection
Get to my recollection, many differences as you cannot get-affection


nice 8.6/10

closer

Giving me a loss for a no show, prophets aren’t down-with-that
If Jesus ever rapped, I hope that he would never sound-this-bad

overall 8.1/10

God

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Rising SON..i got shocking news for you..all this time i've been your daddy//
Scored a one in hole (my dick) or hole in one...bitch i'm the golfer, you my fuckin caddy//

weak 7/10

consitant verse-u had none

closer

Now the times are being rearranged and changed its time to make room for The Vet
Its over cant you see that you lost and this Suns about to set??//

lame

overall 7/10

winner-rising sun
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Old 06-26-04, 12:40 AM   #15
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iight uppin for votes...

















yea i know ppl sleep on this shit..honest votes..
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