now...lets get it crackin...(may the best man win) lol

naw...what u said...10-16 lines (gotta be even number), um...DUE tom. by 6:00pm.? thats too longs, how bout 30 min. after check in...i guess, but before tom....u spit 1st

I didnt realize i put 10-16 my fualt
its cool ill drop my verse by twelve

yo check it

J dot feed off my lyrics...like a fucken hungry etheopian/
after this battle he gonna need a hymulik munover...cuase he chokein/
I'll click the gat have doing the turtle...wit ya head in a shell/
this nigga heading to the bottom...cuase he'll never preavail/
you can buy drum set...cuase ill teach you to rock/
after you lose this battle you gonna feel like lighting...cuase you bound to be shocked/
dog I murder you...took your soul like chris fareley's
nigga claim he a gangsta...but still playin wit barbies/
the only time you was off the meter...is ehem you left a cab watin/
thinkin you can beat me ya seeing things...your halucinatin/

that word is when sorry about that was trying to hurry

im battlin u, and frankly i think u a goof/
i shouldve played duck,duck,goose and chose somebody better than u/
so your METAPHOR? tried out for 'assasinz', and didnt quite make it/
so now u come to my battle thinkin u could take it/
so check it...ur really the one who's closer to a turtle/
go in yo shell, and hide behind curtains cause u kno your gonna get murdered/
i hate when im battling people, and all they do is lie/
when i win u, i'll bump up one more from 5.../
wins that is, cause tryna come at me is a head on collision/
you'll get knocked out with my right hook, and i'll blur yo vision/
you want me to take it soflty, but im too hard for/
u talkn bout puttin me in the bottom, but u just stare at the gat/

Votes Is Needed Ppl..........................................

alright that was pretty decent I hand your credit pimp

good battle both of yall


this was a very close battle

both yall had good punches..structure and flow was good
punches about the same metas too...
what won this battle was j dot you would of got this but your ending kilt ya ryhme..so i have to give it to the meta


vote///the metaphor

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bought of ya'll niggaz is wack but i would give it 2 J DOT he said sum shit i like.still give bought of ya'll nigga ya props

this shit closed no one voteing but i won cause i got a vote

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punchlines - metaphor
metaz - tie
structure - tie
flow - tie
personals - metaphor
opener - metaphor
closer - metaphor

v - metaphor

drop a vote on this ....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133957

-Themetaphor.
J dot feed off my lyrics...like a fucken hungry etheopian/
after this battle he gonna need a hymulik munover...cuase he chokein/
average flow, coo wordplay, weak/predictable punch
I'll click the gat have doing the turtle...wit ya head in a shell/
this nigga heading to the bottom...cuase he'll never preavail/
doesn't flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
you can buy drum set...cuase ill teach you to rock/
after you lose this battle you gonna feel like lighting...cuase you bound to be shocked/
average flow, aight wordplay, aight punch
dog I murder you...took your soul like chris fareley's
nigga claim he a gangsta...but still playin wit barbies/
good flow, coo multi, aight wordplay, aight punch
the only time you was off the meter...is ehem you left a cab watin/
thinkin you can beat me ya seeing things...your halucinatin/
average flow, aight wordplay, weak/predictable punch


-Jdot.
im battlin u, and frankly i think u a goof/
i shouldve played duck,duck,goose and chose somebody better than u/
aight flow, coo wordplay, coo punch
so your METAPHOR? tried out for 'assasinz', and didnt quite make it/
so now u come to my battle thinkin u could take it/
aight multi with the flow, no wordplay, weak diss
so check it...ur really the one who's closer to a turtle/
go in yo shell, and hide behind curtains cause u kno your gonna get murdered/
coo flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
i hate when im battling people, and all they do is lie/
when i win u, i'll bump up one more from 5.../
average flow, no worplay, weak/simplistic diss
wins that is, cause tryna come at me is a head on collision/
you'll get knocked out with my right hook, and i'll blur yo vision/
average flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
you want me to take it soflty, but im too hard for/
u talkn bout puttin me in the bottom, but u just stare at the gat/
doesn't flow, aight wordplay, played out punch


Overall, Meta took this. His was a little more consistent with the punches. Both of your flows are on and off. Both of you should work on your creativity, personals, working and wordplay. You're both getting close to being decent.

Vote - Themetaphor.

metaphor good punches this was a good battle my vote gose to the metaphor