aight bitch its set up...here are the rules...drop ya verse and ill follow up
rules:
no hatin
no d/r
no crew votes
no feedin
10-15 lines
due 30 minutes after check in

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This dumb bitch been talkin shit since she been on the site
But can't back it, even when she rhymes with all her mite
Because wack rhymes won't suffice, especially in this battle
I'm merkin you senseless, droppin you like diseased cattle
You pretend to be gangsta, you say you got serious slugs
But you can't pack heat online, quit tryin to be a net thug
And you claim to be from underground atl., tryin to spit fire
You should change ya name to "thisgirlgetsrolledlikeafuckintire"
For her to fight back would be pointless, like bj condoms
This bitch gets losses so easy, it seems like she wants em
So take this loss with you and head back to the underground
The way these punches hittin ya, you'll be 6 ft. under a mound

ok, uppin for this bitch in case she ain't seen that i dropped

i was out of town i just got back.....i wasn't waitin fa u to drop cuz you were takin to long....but i seen your verse so ill post mine in a lil while after i check in

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Drop ya god damn verse, anything you spit will be wack, so just do somethin...

lol, wooooooooo that was hot Plague. I can't wait for the response ta this.

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Ya BiTch FA ShO!

fuck u pussy.....dont worry here go my response

checkin in.....

This fruit is just anotha nigga nothin I cant handle
Smoke and write rhymes nigga I stay lit more than candles
Get your body all twisted up torn down and dismantled
who the fuck is plague nigga “nobody” this cats a clown
you’ve been on my dick since i got here like is away to get around
you’ll get shot down when you hear that sound cuz i do pack hella heat
You flow is old its decomposed and these parasites on you like dead meat
And no you dont want to battle me and get me brain stormin
These flows I spit get hotter and hotter burn you up like global warmin
You cant spits homie its borin im snorin waitin for your best rhymes nigga its a drag
I feel none of your punches but im treatin and beatin you up like punching bags
You wasn’t ready you came to quick haha i bet you hear that alot
I dont wanna have to park my fist in yo head like cars in parkin lots nigga

now who’s the bitch...bitch

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This was a pretty close battle.

Plague easily took the flow...his shit had a good structure to it and was a lot easier to read than girls.

None of the punches were hittin too hard, Plague had one that stood out I liked.

You pretend to be gangsta, you say you got serious slugs
But you can't pack heat online, quit tryin to be a net thug

Pretty funny stuff lol.

girl was tryin to use multies, like towards the end but i didnt think they helped her. They were more or less just fillers and she shoulda took them out cause they hurt her flow.

Pretty basic rhymes...nothing spectacular, but I give this one to Plague cause he was a lil more on point with the flow/structure.

Bitch I know u ain't call me out hoe, fuck u too dumb hoe.

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Aight, thanks for tha vote...

Uppin

Well never mind my last comment I think she was talkin to Plague.


I think both flows were good but Plague had hard punch lines..Example:

And you claim to be from underground atl., tryin to spit fire
You should change ya name to "thisgirlgetsrolledlikeafuckintire

Nice shit


Girl:

You flow is old its decomposed and these parasites on you like dead meat

Nice line by Girl

but the flow wasn't consistant to me, Plague shit just hit all through out.

Vote=Plague

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Ooooooh, whats happenin fire spitter? I thought u was gonna merk me?

Uppin again....

Black
This dumb bitch been talkin shit since she been on the site
But can't back it, even when she rhymes with all her mite
OK. kinda for-seen the ryhme scheme. 4/10
Because wack rhymes won't suffice, especially in this battle
I'm merkin you senseless, droppin you like diseased cattle
cattle battle....again...seen it comin. 3/10
You pretend to be gangsta, you say you got serious slugs
But you can't pack heat online, quit tryin to be a net thug
its OK. 3/10
And you claim to be from underground atl., tryin to spit fire
You should change ya name to "thisgirlgetsrolledlikeafuckintire"
its original. I give it that. 5/10
For her to fight back would be pointless, like bj condoms
This bitch gets losses so easy, it seems like she wants em
Lol. good line. 6/10
So take this loss with you and head back to the underground
The way these punches hittin ya, you'll be 6 ft. under a mound
6 ft deep thing really played. 2/10
This wasn't horrible. I could kinda see the next line in my head tho before i read on. Seemed predictable. Work on using ryhme schemes that you wouldnt come up with right away. It'll help your verse alot. Nice Job.
23/50

thisgirlspitfire
This fruit is just anotha nigga nothin I cant handle
Smoke and write rhymes nigga I stay lit more than candles
Get your body all twisted up torn down and dismantled
You talk about yourself. flo is off. 3/10
who the fuck is plague nigga “nobody” this cats a clown
you’ve been on my dick since i got here like is away to get around
nigga nigga nigga all u say......an u have a dick? 1/10
you’ll get shot down when you hear that sound cuz i do pack hella heat
You flow is old its decomposed and these parasites on you like dead meat
heat meat....not too exciting. weak punch. 3/10
And no you dont want to battle me and get me brain stormin
These flows I spit get hotter and hotter burn you up like global warmin
Good metiphore. 5/10
You cant spits homie its borin im snorin waitin for your best rhymes nigga its a drag
I feel none of your punches but im treatin and beatin you up like punching bags
predictable ryhmes scheme. stretched. played punch. 2/10
You wasn’t ready you came to quick haha i bet you hear that alot
I dont wanna have to park my fist in yo head like cars in parkin lots nigga
nigga again....original closer. 5/10
Not that bad. I suggest you don't use nigga as many times as u use it but thats me. Your closer was pretty good punch I liked it. Try an keep your lines even. It helps your flo.
19/60

Vote/The Black Plague

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