10-20 lines
all votes accepted must have explanation or dq'd
you up first
no feedin off thread -make it fair-

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BOSTON LYRICIST

alright checkin in dis bitch good luck fam..............

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whats really good crew mem vs crew mem
checked in boi

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BOSTON LYRICIST

You can cut out the lucky charm in your Celtics Jersey,
............................Luck still wouldn't be on your side..
BL was really an african prostitute desperate to leave his country,
..............................................So he hitched A ride..
Ended up in Boston where he met his long lost love,
.................................................. ..........Elton John..
5 months later BL's pregnant,
..........................Hopes of turning straight, Now Gone..


How You Figure Your A HWCS vet when your at the bottom of the list..
Only Source Of Power you have, comes from the wrist..
(too Much Masterbation is not good )
Your lines don't spark You have to jump in a forest fire Just To be Hot..
(too much dedication)
Verbal abuse, leave more X's On you then a mathematical Line-plot..
Say your talented, but lost more then 50% of your battles..
Only "Rounds" In your advantage is when your gathering the cattle..
Lines send heat waves to your brain causing total meltdown..
Only "Juelz" You'll ever see is in when viewing "santana's Town"..
HWCS didn't hire you to rap you were hired to be our MasCotte..
seconds later, dude in a bear suit rockin a hardwood class-sickz jersey,
.................Dancing in the middle of elton john's parking lot..
Lines Hidious, The Lord even shook his head in disbelief..
Made God Get up off his chair,
.................................................. ..and go beneath..

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good shit cap....disrespectful niccah...watch me



im bout to go to the HEAD -OF STATE like chris rock//
have did boi non seen like B.I.G fuckin kim when he's on top//
watch as i drop capitol like the second letter in my name//
put the glok to ya stomach like pac got it tated to his frame//
they say its treachory when a soilder challenges athority//
only reason he the leader of HWCS is cause he was head bitch
of his sorority//
your shit gets counted out like a birthday on christmas//
your flow vs me means nothin like a blind eye witness//
com on son im not a newbie or mc of a lower caliba//
you got your record for battlein all rookies cause they was the only ones to challlenge ya//
im a relentless cat wit no remores and i give ah fuck bout youe position//
im the bad guy who kills this cruise character on his impossible mission//

READ THIS ....ITS REAL IMPORTANT

i have to keep this personal to get this win//
but if he takes a loss his crew might look down at him//
i dont give a fuck though cause my skillz exceed his mind capacity//
he pretty boi mc like cassidy couldnt even outflow tigga on rap city//
i implement a virus to sever our connection//
he cant be cock strong cause his erection goen in a downward direction//
impeach his ass from hardwood for lack of talent confession//
i murder my king cause of his lack of pride and selfesteem//
no one wants the loss stat on our record if we lose thats why we made him leader or our team//

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BOSTON LYRICIST

Long battle didn't say much

Boston.....where are your punches man, you didn't have any personals either man, you ya flow was ok but that was it gotta elevate

Flow: 6/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals: 3/10
Metas: 3/10
Overall: 16/40

State...I expected better you had a few weak punches but nothing spectacular, you had personals but they were weak, flow coulda been better an I don't know what kinda structure that was

Flow: 5/10
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Overall: 20/40

Y'all both could have dropped much harder in this'
Vote: State

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uppin this...............good drop boston 1-0 me...............

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Bl- damn dogg...i didnt see any personals there were punches but they came
off weak or played...you flow was ok not great...but its punches and personals
that win battles and i didnt really see any from you...

6/10

SC- Did you try a new struc or what......you did have punches and personals
so its obvious that you got my vote your flow was ok...

7.5/10

Vote Sc

uppin this .................................................. ......................

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i wil return the favour if you drop an honest vote on this

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yea i gotta say, BL you didnt have ne foreal hard punches or personals.. deleons right, you need to put more punched in there.. either go work on your metas, cause those can be good punches...flow was aiiiight..


state:it was obvious you won... you had some nice punches.. flow was decent..punches were the main difference between the verses,,




http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Bl-Comeone, Aight spit But orginal and didnt really have nothing
but you did have similies and Structure leaving balance good and
no flow

SC-You had everything a lil and you beat him from not
that much of anything but similies and Balance and Punches
mainly hit harder

v/SC

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uppin............................................. ......

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B- okay verse..you had punches here and there but none really stuck, the personals...well I don't recall seeing any of them.....a fair structure and vocab was decent but not the best oh yeah you had a nice flow as well

Sc- an okay verse ..not your best ..I seen better from you. you had a few punches as well...but you had personals too....your verse was felt more...harder hitting..punches stuck..since this was not your best i assumed you rushed this ...did you?

v/sc

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