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gunit101. 1 16.67%
D-Tain 5 83.33%
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Old 07-12-04, 12:37 PM   #1
D-Tain
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D-Tain vs gunit101.

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10 lines, usuall rules u should know

ill go first, dont fukin no show
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Old 07-12-04, 01:14 PM   #2
D-Tain
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your like a kids toilet seat, you about to get shit on...
and wiped clean wit the toilet paper you pre-writ on...

u cant rap but u cling onto the mic like mildew and mold...
u bit off more than u can chew, now you in a choke hold...

wot bout that PM u sent me? I think it shud of said "im ILL, Bitch"...
but you must of hit the wrong buttons, it said im a LIL Bitch...

my words should leave you hung up like the end of a fone call...
your skill level so small, its no suprise u got no respect at all..

and after this your record should read, gunit 0 Rapbattles 3...
you should ask for a name change, of your record wiped clean...
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Old 07-12-04, 02:18 PM   #3
gunit101.
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Ahahah you are so very terrible, and i never PMed you. Herb, be gone. I said I couldn't key up at work, but you're just that pitiful.

^ that shit alone whored you, you're so done
Cuz like your school experience, you'll never pass 101
I mean, I could try in this battle, but why bother?
Even your fucking bars are trying to run away from each other
n your lines are all played, its safe to say
You only using toilet lines, cuz thats where your lines end anyway
This ain't close to fair, my lines lightnin n thunder
while this bitch tried to elevate... n ended 6 feet under
so wack, even with this win, my records stained
got this bitch on lock so bad, even his names detained
 
Old 07-12-04, 03:18 PM   #4
gunit101.
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upping.
 
Old 07-12-04, 03:28 PM   #5
schema
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d-tain youve got some good shit going on like i see crazy potential but your punches get weak at the end

u cant rap but u cling onto the mic like mildew and mold...
->>sounds like the beginning of something hilarious that luda would say or something
u bit off more than u can chew, now you in a choke hold...
->>Zzz Zzz....

my words should leave you hung up like the end of a fone call...
->>damn thats funny hows he gonna end it....
your skill level so small, its no suprise u got no respect at all..
->>Zzz Zzz....

you see what I mean like you could be crazy good if you think it out more and make your punches real good instead of getting generic at the end

101 took it in my mind though b/c he made me laugh and shit and his was put together better

^ that shit alone whored you, you're so done
Cuz like your school experience, you'll never pass 101
->>decent opener
I mean, I could try in this battle, but why bother?
Even your fucking bars are trying to run away from each other
->>shit made me laugh out loud great personal about the structure
n your lines are all played, its safe to say
You only using toilet lines, cuz thats where your lines end anyway
->>good personal
This ain't close to fair, my lines lightnin n thunder
while this bitch tried to elevate... n ended 6 feet under
->>kinda generic but decent
so wack, even with this win, my records stained
got this bitch on lock so bad, even his names detained
->>decent

i got way too long with this but v- gunit101
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Old 07-12-04, 04:26 PM   #6
QBsmasher
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I think D-Tain alone stood out in this battle. The only good punches that gunit had were feeding. I think if we were all allowed to feed and I went 2nd I would win every battle. I just wasnt seein any creativity from gunit and no good metas either. The flow really wasnt on point from him, nor was his structure. He had a lot of streched lines and i just wasnt feelin it.

D-Tain, nice flow good overall structure. I think you did end a few of your lines weak, but you had some nice metas in there that really stood out in your battle. Keep up the work and just keep comin harder and harder each battle.

v/D-Tain
 
Old 07-12-04, 04:59 PM   #7
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uppin
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Old 07-12-04, 05:05 PM   #8
CounTREE Jay
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Well, G-Unit, the herb of all herbs, callin' this cat a herb, that's comedy. Anyway, this nigga D-Tain came wit some decent shit, they were both about even. But G-Unit fed off this niggaz verse, a bitch move, and his bother/other bar simply doesn't ryhme, so ima give this one to D-tain, and y'all both need to elevate badly.

-CJ-
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Old 07-12-04, 05:08 PM   #9
the metaphor
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ima have to give this to 101 had ill puches
d train like your open but my vote gos to 101

check out my open battle so theyll close
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Old 07-12-04, 05:12 PM   #10
D-Tain
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aight man, yo meta is it fun riding dick? ama try it one day! maybe ucan show me
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Old 07-12-04, 05:48 PM   #11
.gunit101
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^^^ nice swaying.....you guys are killing my boy in here. First of all, if you read the verse, there was no feeding in his verse. All he did was put a generic ^ at his whole verse. Second, if you are too infantile to understand his punches, you need to go back to your third grade tutor. And third.....I'm disappointed with you Raw, I really thought you would have been impartial in this one.....but you're just a follower like everyone else on this board. I've just lost respect for you.....
 
Old 07-12-04, 07:20 PM   #12
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wtf are you talking about??
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Old 07-12-04, 08:26 PM   #13
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blahj both were bad and had nothing that made me think wow that hurt him but D-tain had a few better lines with potential and flow than Gunit101. oh aand G get a new name you fucking herb..
pz.
 
Old 07-12-04, 08:43 PM   #14
Plutonium
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^^
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D-tain had way better lines, his flow and structure is also better
101's opener didn't rhyme, and he was feeding off the other guy's verse
D-tain just had a better structured verse with some ill punches

vote: D-tain
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Old 07-12-04, 09:52 PM   #15
gunit101.
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lmfao. how many of you have ever heard rap?

101 and your so done don't rhyme? lol

one step closer to 0-50
 
 


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