Some say the best love is one sprung from a friendship
So I feel we should try, Time leads us in this direction
Should we follow it all the way down the line?
Friendship and love are almost always intertwined.
Sometimes i find,
That things arent always meant to be,
The reason why i love you, is liberation, means we're free.
How crazy can i seem, for wanting to believe,
that maybe i was good enuff, to believe in you and me.
I guess what you really needed was just a friend,
I tried to go farther, and yet a friend is what i have been.
NO more, no less. I can just hold you to my chest.
I will be a caring individual, honest, true and spiratual.
you heart seams plead, that everything you need doesent reside in me....

unfinished poem, about a girl if u couldnt tell

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That was pretty nice kid.

thanks man, still workin on it.. more feedback is always appreciated =)

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it's coo i like the poem

good poem kidd....alot of emotion...know where u comin from wit dat...keep it comin...peace

nice emotion fam big up!!!!!!!!! and good luck with finishing it!!!!

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this was awesome, its nice to see a guy writing poems about his feelings, girls love this shit, whoever she is, u should let her read this........

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nice poem keep up the good job