reg rules 12-16 bars you spit first

iight
aiyyo da cans is shakin tha whole world is waitin
for golden shellz ta kill he and all dats waitin.
droppin lyrical bombs on dis nigga hi-c
he only had 1 reply and dat shit wuzz from me.
U neva hard body u like snuggle u soft
u like vanilla ice nigga no wonder u feel off
But lemme stop fuckin round time to see wats goin down
we was neva friends so why u wanna pound now.u a bitch
so u lay on ya back to get laid. I won this battle and i got it made
lets this nigga waste time while i chill in da shade.
u a excuse 4 a rapper, a trick a bitch
u couldnt stop me if u were da nba's #1 draft pick. hol;la

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homie you cant win, your rhymes are so typical
wouldnt beat me in a fight even if it was physical
when i spit the audience just turns alive, uh
when you spit all that comes out is fuckin saliva
you choked after 4 bars, couldnt hold up the pace
too bad the 'can is shakin', sprayed all ova ya face
1 reply is all it takes for me to make a blue colla craze
1 is all it takes for yall to get booed off stage
got nervous dropped the mic like ya double jointed
look to the crowd and get shakes of disappointment
this'll be done before your nausea even quells
coz everyone can see i blasted ya wit golden shellz

arite ima up this cos nobody votin...come on get votin and ill hit urs up too

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aalright here...HI-C your talented you have vocab...but reword your liens to make em sound stronger...here i can do one right now

homie you cant win, your rhymes are so typical
into
How You Gon' defeat me, kid your rhymes are so typical....

and put .......... after each line

try to get some personals in there....its good...
other than that its good
good flow...good vocab....ok punches ok personals...good job

golden
your shit was aiight.....u culd of done better..........
your punches were aiight....personals ok
structre...ass... flow......ass..
but you did a good job

vote: HI-C

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LMFAO!!! Golden what can i say keep battelin ull get better and betterbut uhh man elevate on tha real.. HI-C got this one...

Vote - Hi-C

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listen to wat capital said, I saw dat Ur punches were going places but U left them in the sand. U should end lines just AS strong or if not, stronger than U begin them. U flow was better than Shellz, U had a personal that wasnt too good but It was ok for a closer. U should work on vacab and connecting better wit Ur punches.
Ur verse gets a 6 out of 10

Shellz, Ur lines need a lot of work. They were just pops and talk. U had one good punch but it only brushed Chronics shoulder a lil. nothing fanzy here. I wasnt really feeling Ur flow and U should work on Ur vocab a lot. U miss spelled a four letter word, "Fell" Ur wrote feel off. thats wrong. Ur verse gets a 2 out of 10

Punches, HC
Flow, HC
Structure, HC
Metaphores, none
Wordplay, none
Overall, HC

V/ High on Cronic

P.S. hit up atleast one of my battles in my sig and drop an honest vote please, thanx. keep elivating.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

aite im uppin this one for the night then i gota go to sleep...dont let this copy me, gimme some votes for me to come back to!!

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Punches - hc
Flow - hc
Structure - hc
Metaz- ?
Wordplay, ?
creativity - hc

v- HC

drop a vote on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062

arite uppin uppin, just need one more vote to close this shit up, if you need me to return the favor i will just vote!

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