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~An Average Human In Myself pale Colored Skin And brown Eyes ~
~Untill this Sudden Day Were I Visualized The Darkness Of Skies~
~Time Paused In An Instant With No Warning Or Sound~
~ The Force Of Fear Pushed Me Opon the Hardness Of Ground~
~Sweat Grew Greatly As Did The Worlds Thunder ~
~Figuers Of Nothingness Rose Below My feet And Under~
~Smiling With Red Teeth Intensions Of A Bloody Plan~
~They Moved Quickly..Pulled Me Below With No Hands~
~Caged In A Shadows Arms Figuers Merging As Seven~
~Was I To Be Castrated To Hell Or purefied In Heaven~
~The Speed We Touched Could Even Challenge Infinity~
~My Eyes Drowned In Fear Mentally Soaked In a Mystery~
~It Burned My Skin To Ashes....The Picture Was Drawn~
~As An Old Wise Soul Was Reserected Into A Body Of New Born~
~I Appeared In The Fountain Of Youth Speachless To Say~
~That My Body Was Restored And My Hands Could Reach Into Day~
~I Was Surfaced Above The Earth The Planet Benathe~
~I Could Hear The Screams Feel the Agony In The Streets~
~The Emontions And Fears Graspt me I Could'nt React~
~ A Robbery... A Knife Threw A Mortals Heart And Out My Bacc~
~ A Young Women Abonded Lost And Confined Alone~
~All Colors Fighting Must We Recive And Inflict punishment Against our Own~
~Voice of the people is ..A..Hate Devoleped Voice Realesing A Roar~
~Screaming for a better place cause they dream of so much more~
~That The So Called Soldiers fought for In Wars in the pages of the past~
~The Hunger Of Many The Wealth Of Some we all die just as fast~
~The Intellegence In One The Embarrsment Of Being Dumb in another~
~The Belifes Of good Seemed To Have Resided in that wich is our farther~
~ Satanic Actions leading Our nation With guideance and insanity~
~Guiding In T.V. Our Family Those In And Out Of The Cells of profanity~
~This Breed Created By The Heavenly being and Is Being Plunged To hell~
~Mark my words you sheep and wait for the Reeper to ring the bell~

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wow, thanks for making this forum more interesting, this is one of the best pieces with the good intention for deciphering it, thanks,ok, this is what i saw, someone dying, being pulled into the afterlife, maybe pergatory to discuss his sins or past, it seems you describe this beautifully, your words and they're imagery are incredible, i pictured it as i read it, ok, like someone was stuck in the afterlife and reincarnated as spirit to see what hell ther was in the world, if i'm wrong, let me know, what it was to you, because i'm curious, dope drop

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yea Nice piece really good topic styles man.....Uppin this piece for Ice

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