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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

I Already Peep'd Ya Shit And I Know You're Weak! You To Young For This! No Way You'll Ever Be Pushin Pounds You Feather Weight! And I'll Show Ya The Sky Cause When You Catchin My UpperCuts Is The Only Time You Elevate!

Why You Even Bother To Step? I Got Nice Aim Bout To Pull Out My Weapons! You Judgin Me Cause At RB My Name Is New! But Trust I'm A Rap Solider Bout To Teach You The Art Of War Cause DiM Sunz Tzu! (Sons You)

Text Ya Only Accomplishment! Skilled? You're The Exact Oppisite! Ever Better Than Me That's Just Preposterous! Time To Come Out The Closet Kid! Cause I'll Split Ya Soft Clique Wit Spit From Ya Own Esophagus!

Big Mouth'd On Some Dumb Shit! Girls Round Him Finally Growin Some Tits And He's Screamin 'Somethin New To Me!' This Youngin Been Spendin His Child Hood Years Jackin Off To Power Puff Girls Dreamin Bout Hittin Puberty!

And I Hate-Sluts! Slappin This Bitch-Messed Up His Make Up! You Softer Than Charmin Cat! And You Still Reppin Yaself As A Bitch Who Is Just Fulla Bitch Moves! Sorry To Say I Just Shit On You! But No Need For Toliet Papper When I Got L.I. Raps!

Must not have been told that to rap talent is a must...
Kids skills.. go about a high as an oxygen ballon does...
Career must be in glue.. way his rap fate is stuck...
Fuck lettin the light DiM.. i just pulled the plug...
No need to tell him.. he already knows he suck at this…
He hides the truth.. more than the US govament…
Quit sayin UF is tight.. get your facts straight...
They skills are bout as small as mary kate...
No need to argue.. either wa u losin, no fussin b...
Only reason you can battle in EFL.. is becuz of me!...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

^^^^^^^ahhhh what iz that supposed to be?????

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LMAO....this was horrible...

DiM, if you really want to battle on this site, you need to shorten your lines. You could have taken about 20 - 25 words out of each bar. Your punches sucked too.

Are you serious? Please don't ever come with gay lines like that ever again. The only punch that might have been good was the Dim sons you one, but I don't know what the Art Of War is, so I didn't get it. I'm guessing it's someones name from it. The rest of your verse was just filler. If you don't know what filler is, it's bars you write just to fill space......aka, your whole verse....lol.


L.I, that was the worst I have ever seen you spit, seriously. Opener was ehh and the punch on his name was too obvious. Government line was a filler. Mary Kate? C'mon now.....Closer wasn't bad but he probably doesn't get it. Your lines were almost too short in this one, but it still was much better than stretching your bars out to three full lines....lol. Next time step it up a bit.....you still took this though.

Vote - L.I.......for atleast coming with halfway decent punches

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Break down:

I Already Peep'd Ya Shit And I Know You're Weak! You To Young For This! No Way You'll Ever Be Pushin Pounds You Feather Weight! And I'll Show Ya The Sky Cause When You Catchin My UpperCuts Is The Only Time You Elevate!
^Bar was nice punchline wise..but where was the flow..you had no flow at all.. which ruined the entire bar.. less than average.. 4/10

Why You Even Bother To Step? I Got Nice Aim Bout To Pull Out My Weapons! You Judgin Me Cause At RB My Name Is New! But Trust I'm A Rap Solider Bout To Teach You The Art Of War Cause DiM Sunz Tzu! (Sons You)
^again no flow at all.. punchline was average..wordplay was coo.. lil basic rhyme scehem so far tho..6/10

Text Ya Only Accomplishment! Skilled? You're The Exact Oppisite! Ever Better Than Me That's Just Preposterous! Time To Come Out The Closet Kid! Cause I'll Split Ya Soft Clique Wit Spit From Ya Own Esophagus!
^this was good.. first time i actually saw a flow at all..good multies..nice punches.. 8/10

Big Mouth'd On Some Dumb Shit! Girls Round Him Finally Growin Some Tits And He's Screamin 'Somethin New To Me!' This Youngin Been Spendin His Child Hood Years Jackin Off To Power Puff Girls Dreamin Bout Hittin Puberty!
^nice punches..but again, no flow.......flow is a must, or else its not a verse-Period.

And I Hate-Sluts! Slappin This Bitch-Messed Up His Make Up! You Softer Than Charmin Cat! And You Still Reppin Yaself As A Bitch Who Is Just Fulla Bitch Moves! Sorry To Say I Just Shit On You! But No Need For Toliet Papper When I Got L.I. Raps!
^i thought this was horrible..no flow.. no rhymes foreal in it..just a diss sentence..wasent feeling this.. 3/10

Last thoughts: The thoughts and wordplay-punches were there..but wtf man.. no flow.. no rap devices for real.. sentences are for papers, not verses.. over verse was 5/10 due to lack of flow and structure...

L.I:
Must not have been told that to rap talent is a must...
Kids skills.. go about a high as an oxygen ballon does...
^nice punch.. good flow.. 7/10 for an opener
Career must be in glue.. way his rap fate is stuck...
Fuck lettin the light DiM.. i just pulled the plug...
^2 nice punches, and one good nameplay.. 8/10 punch.. nice
No need to tell him.. he already knows he suck at this…
He hides the truth.. more than the US govament…
^lol.. i like that meta..us goverment lol.. 7.5/10
Quit sayin UF is tight.. get your facts straight...
They skills are bout as small as mary kate...
^hmm..aight punch... 6/10
No need to argue.. either wa u losin, no fussin b...
Only reason you can battle in EFL.. is becuz of me!...
^i like that one tho lol.. 7/10

Last thoughts: Felt this was a nice drop.. 7.2/10.. had some nice punches.. flow was decent.. Structure was decent..

i felt L.I won this battle because his verse resembled actual music, and not some Diss collection.. i hate shit that doesent flow..<-- thats annoying as shit.. dont do that.. rap.. dont write sentences.. aight?

Vote: L.I - Honest, Broken Down Vote.. Holla

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

You Don't Know Wat The Art Of War Is? ..

.. Wow Go To School You Dumb Fuck ..

.. Sun Tzu .. Art Of War .. Look It Up ..

.. Called Word Play ..

.. This Site Is Fuckin Stupid ..

.. Luckily Our Site Battle Is At A Site Who Actually Knows Wat Text Rap Is ..

dim only nice bar u had was the art of war punch nice rhyme shceme in that all ya shit is like an autobiography in each line dog ya fuckin bars are weak cause of that step ya game up kid take about half the bullshit u said out actin like u in an interview on 20/20 the way ya talkin so much in each line shit was weak

l.i opposite bars was to short didnt say much in each of em better flow punchs wasnt to good but still better then dim lights shit

vote l.i for not bein as weak

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Vote DiM

Because I like his name. But i'm polling for L.I. Bitches.

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