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check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
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no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
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Blue Print

B.P.

Finally the second coming...This verse should do.
Click the links that are provided
To fully understand personals!

How you a punchline master? And you got a doctor to give you punchlines
You faking to write, Waiting to bite like kids standing in lunchlines
This dude says rhymings his life, And his occupation is spittin
Lets be more specific, Is it what your digestive system was gettin
Take a look at Triple D's crew lounge, Where Triple N done took a visit
How are they a spinnoff off your name, When they didn't know you existed
Now can you tell me what the jury done, Claiming to rest a case
The only case the jury done closed was the casket to cover your face
Your raps is a waste, A disgrace, To ever be place in a dreamcast lobby
Why you not on the list? Can't you see in your name that you a triple Nobody

His profile

Triple D's Crew Lounge lol

His Dreamcast tryout lol

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B.P.

Ah'ight here we go...good luck


U came to relaunched cuz on original u was gettin' sonned for weeks on hand
I don't understand, was being the posterboy for wackness planned
The future of your repretation on relaunched is looking pretty grim
Cuz your user title proves that your a flaming homo an into S&M
These are undeniable facts, you know you can't fight-this
Now everyone knows your lyrics an asshole lack tightness
You jus drop forced multies that no one can figure the meaning too
Shit!!, I have seen double amputees throw harder punches than you
Your spits are pathetic, not a one of them has been impressive
I pity your verses cuz their all sadder than manic depressives
Ya rhymes are strong at birth, fade over their lifetime, could neva maul me
All ya rhymes got genetic defects, they form verses wit cerebral palsy


Ah'ight Hold dat son!!!!!!!!!!!

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For those who don't know what S&M is its bondage sex

An cerebral palsy is a degenerative disease meaning the body weakens over time

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dc

How you a punchline master? And you got a doctor to give you punchlines
You faking to write, Waiting to bite like kids standing in lunchlines
decent opener nice play off his rapper punch not hittin to hard
This dude says rhymings his life, And his occupation is spittin
Lets be more specific, Is it what your digestive system was gettin
again personals in first line punch again not that great didnt feal it
Take a look at Triple D's crew lounge, Where Triple N done took a visit
How are they a spinnoff off your name, When they didn't know you existed
lmaoo nice bars right there bout time....nice personals an punch
Now can you tell me what the jury done, Claiming to rest a case
The only case the jury done closed was the casket to cover your face
......nothin really off this.. set up line coulda set up a way better punch
Your raps is a waste, A disgrace, To ever be place in a dreamcast lobby
Why you not on the list? Can't you see in your name that you a triple Nobody
above average punch personal is played on him though

overall-didnt really feal this verse u droped here didnt like the comas either fucked up the flow of the verse had a few good personals some useless multies not a very good verse to me maybe u just took him lightly but i didnt feal this verse to much

triple d lol


U came to relaunched cuz on original u was gettin' sonned for weeks on hand
I don't understand, was being the posterboy for wackness planned
personal in first line decent punch wasnt worded right but still came out decent
The future of your repretation on relaunched is looking pretty grim
Cuz your user title proves that your a flaming homo an into S&M
lol nice punch..... first line...nope...
These are undeniable facts, you know you can't fight-this
Now everyone knows your lyrics an asshole lack tightness
lol ..gay punchs are funny but dont hit to hard decent lines though
You jus drop forced multies that no one can figure the meaning too
Shit!!, I have seen double amputees throw harder punches than you
pretty nice bars right here liked that first an 2nd both nice to me
Your spits are pathetic, not a one of them has been impressive
I pity your verses cuz their all sadder than manic depressives
pretty nice punch there first line...nothin to say
Ya rhymes are strong at birth, fade over their lifetime, could neva maul me
All ya rhymes got genetic defects, they form verses wit cerebral palsy
did u say rhymes? cause i didnt see it coulda been some nice bars but first line messed up the whole thing i think tried to hard to rhyme wit palsy

overall-good an bad spots in the verse didnt like the commas either on yours had some nice personals punchs was hit an miss i did enjoy readin your verse more though

vote triple n

came with better material in this battle think that dc just slept on didnt bring all he could

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How you a punchline master? And you got a doctor to give you punchlines
You faking to write, Waiting to bite like kids standing in lunchlines
kinda played line..i wasnt feelin it too much....it would of been better if you worded it better but the second line is played to hell...good try though 5/10
This dude says rhymings his life, And his occupation is spittin
Lets be more specific, Is it what your digestive system was gettin
umm NO..sorry fam this was another pretty bad line...i wasnt feelin the second line and u set it up ok..but the second line ruined ur whole set up...ok multi 5.5/10
Take a look at Triple D's crew lounge, Where Triple N done took a visit
How are they a spinnoff off your name, When they didn't know you existed
lol...this hit pretty good...nice shit now heres a good line..good set up and good punch....very nice 8/10
Now can you tell me what the jury done, Claiming to rest a case
The only case the jury done closed was the casket to cover your face
this line was aiight......nothin spictacular..ive seen better from u....the second line u shuld of worded it better then it wuld of been nicer 6/10
Your raps is a waste, A disgrace, To ever be place in a dreamcast lobby
Why you not on the list? Can't you see in your name that you a triple Nobody
ewwww waste,disgrace,place PLAYEDDDDDDDDDd...lol this line was aiight..nothin too good again.....6/10

overall: you could of did better....ive seen much better from u
31/50


U came to relaunched cuz on original u was gettin' sonned for weeks on hand
I don't understand, was being the posterboy for wackness planned
first line kinda stretched......wasnt too good.....second line was pretty decent..not that good for an opener but it'll do 6/10
The future of your repretation on relaunched is looking pretty grim
Cuz your user title proves that your a flaming homo an into S&M
good wordplay and vocab in first line..second line was pretty hot..lol at SNM...nice shit dawg....7.5/10
These are undeniable facts, you know you can't fight-this
Now everyone knows your lyrics an asshole lack tightness
first line..noooooo....lol plz dont ever spit sum'n like dat again..i wasnt feelin dat at all.......second line was pretty good the last 5 words saved u lol......nice shit fam 7/10
You jus drop forced multies that no one can figure the meaning too
Shit!!, I have seen double amputees throw harder punches than you
damn this hit hard....this right here i think was ur hardest line soo far...nice shit...lol...kilt him with the second line....... 8/10
Your spits are pathetic, not a one of them has been impressive
I pity your verses cuz their all sadder than manic depressives
first line qwas ok...rpetty good multi's....good set up and good second line it hit ok.... 7/10
Ya rhymes are strong at birth, fade over their lifetime, could neva maul me
All ya rhymes got genetic defects, they form verses wit cerebral palsy
this shit was pretty nice for a closer..i was feelin da vocab...culda worded better..and a lil stretched but it was nice 7.5/10

vote: triple N

good battle fam..nice shit on da real....

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Ok NiCe Battle Hard Choice But Break Down

Opener

How you a punchline master? And you got a doctor to give you punchlines
You faking to write, Waiting to bite like kids standing in lunchlines

This Was Pretty NiCe Start Off 9/10

U came to relaunched cuz on original u was gettin' sonned for weeks on hand
I don't understand, was being the posterboy for wackness planned

Wouldve Been Sick If It asnt Stretched So Far So 8.7/10

Section..Classic

Bestline..

Now can you tell me what the jury done, Claiming to rest a case
The only case the jury done closed was the casket to cover your face

Descent Very Origanal 9/10

You jus drop forced multies that no one can figure the meaning too
Shit!!, I have seen double amputees throw harder punches than you

Simple Vocab....But 9.3/10

Section..Triple N

Closer....

Your raps is a waste, A disgrace, To ever be place in a dreamcast lobby
Why you not on the list? Can't you see in your name that you a triple Nobody

That Was Sick 9.5/10

Ya rhymes are strong at birth, fade over their lifetime, could neva maul me
All ya rhymes got genetic defects, they form verses wit cerebral palsy

Damnn...You have 2 Understand What He's Talkin About 9.6/10 Tight

Section/Triple

Overall..Triple N Gets My Vote NiCe Battle Tho....

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You jus drop forced multies that no one can figure the meaning too
Shit!!, I have seen double amputees throw harder punches than you...NNN lets start with that..you prolly are the master of punchines...that was hott..your flow was there and the wordplay and a hell lota metas and multis..ya heard?

Now Daclassic you had hott shit too but but the flow wasnt there and the structure was a little whack ya know? you had good word play some lines were played but that aight ya know? umm just keep elevatin

I'ma give this one to Triple N

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Godson how about you elevate...Yeah you'll right it wasnt my best....I admit it was a rushed verse done it in like 15 minutes. but good luck to triple N.
Oh and that digestive system line...was basically..saying he filling his stomach with semen so he always spittin...some shit like that...but oh well...good luck.

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Breakdown...

daclassic-

to be honest man not really feelin ya verse, know u can come alot harder than this, it was like u were maybe tryin to hard with ya punches nthey ended up not hittin great, o.k verse with gud flow n vocab but not great....

triple N-

nice verse ere. came out with a decent opener n got beta as he went through his verse, wasn't feelin the gay line cos i think there played but apart from that solid verse which definately won u the battle...

peace

v/triple n

will u two hit up mine n state capitols battle...? hot battle bein badly slept on!

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that's a three to nothing...victory. congratulations triple N good luck in the league. peace.

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B.P.

I dunno if voting is over but this line was nice

Now can you tell me what the jury done, Claiming to rest a case
The only case the jury done closed was the casket to cover your face

will be within punchline of the week for next mag