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07-13-04, 01:49 PM | #1 | |||||||
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just a rhyme
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fuck rappin and rymin, im the biggest murderer
cant stop me, im like a fuckin power surger drop better rhymes than dre on the chronic knock you on your ass quicker than gin and tonic dont put up ur gloves, there no use to even defend we gotta fend for ourselves, but its always the same end either behind bars or dead in the streets can hardly put shoes on our feet, cant make ends meet so now we gotta resort to rhymin or sellin rock to c death in the D, its not really a shock after the first time you c it you become numb to it Bush is no help, but it looks like that bum dun blew it 9-11, sirens sound, in another great depression the ghettos expandin, and no sight of supression thats y we gotta resort to this 9 and make it fatal because the 9 to 5 wont put food on the table enjoy, tell me how it is |
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07-13-04, 03:03 PM | #2 | |||||||
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thats pretty good yo.
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07-13-04, 10:24 PM | #3 | |||||||
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id really like another reply on this , tell me what needs to be fixed
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07-13-04, 10:37 PM | #4 | |||||
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its ok it could definitely use improvement use too many basic rhyming words... i rate this a 4/10 keep working hard.. and u will get better...
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07-14-04, 12:53 AM | #5 | |||||||
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ok thats cool that works anymore help for me
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