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Old 07-15-04, 08:03 PM   #1
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Post Lord Help Me!!! (whole song)

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Intro: Uh, Lord I ask that you can forgive me for my sins that I have committed that I never repented against. And I’ll like to thank you for all your blessing’ and the talent you provided me with… Amen

Verse: wit suicide thoughts (yeah!!!) I was gone off my memories/
gun cocked while I’m sippin’ on some Hennessy/
Tell me father I God will except me for the things I’ve done/
the Bible says you’ll go to heaven if you believe in his son/
I believe that I’ve fallin’ in temptation and hate/
and sometimes I find myself askin’ God for a break/
but honestly I don’t deserve a thing (why should I)/
cuz I served up the school now I’m known as a king/
I would of never in my life ever dreamed/ that I will be a rapper and other things/
but life is short homey so you gotta live long/
even if you stay in the crib you’ll still get blasted on/
and I said it and I meant it/ now it’s not to late to talk to God and repent kid/
and pray for other people even if they mean nothin’/
I wanna dedicate this to Sunny Boy and Pumpkin’ ( yeah!!! )…

Hook: Lord I ask why/
if I’ve never been baptized/
will you except me/
will you ever help me… (4x)

Verse: You see I’m not that religious/
talk bad wit digits/
six, six, six you don’t have to feel this (yeah!!)/
But I honestly don’t go to church I can’t stand it/
cuz it’s hypocrites all around like they follow commandments/
thou shall not judge another nigga doin’ his thing/
even if it’s Gospel, R&B or Hip-Hop/
they should just stop and take a look at themselves/
then they will see that they need help I’m by myself/
not really cuz the Lords behind me/
I know 100% in my rhymes G. /
you can find me in chi-town/
and yes I stay wit the pound/
just in case a nigga wants my face in the ground/
but if I die I know about my fate/
I’m not ready so please lord you’ll have to wait/
and I know it’s better in the place that I’m going/
but maybe not cuz I’m not knowin’ ( that’s why I wanna know)

Hook: Lord I ask why/
if I’ve never been baptized/
will you except me/
will you ever help me… (4x)

Verse: everybody in the world committed a sin/
even if it’s little or it’s puttin’ shit on the fin/
but me I don’t ask questions cuz the answer will soon come/
even if it’s runnin’ away from/ the reality that’s real/
not sure how long I’ma be livin’ will I die in peace or be killed/
but we all need to know about the savior that’s God son/
and how we died on the cross and he’s the real one/
but I ain’t rappin’ to get to start worshipin’ God /
cuz like the songs says he got the world in his palms/
and yeah I started to sell 16’s to Dimes/
and you can tell that God is up in my rhymes All of the time/
if it’s me on some real shit or me tryna tell you how I came up/
it don’t matter the Lord is wit me no matter what/
so I need to start to give a fuck… (And wonder)

Hook: Lord I ask why/
If I’ve never been baptized/
Will you except me/
Will you ever help me? (8x)

(and if anybody got feedback let it be some real shit not no hatin' shit)

Last edited by Young Smirf : 07-16-04 at 05:19 PM.
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Old 07-15-04, 08:42 PM   #2
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yo thats nice man. deep shit.. if you record it itll be dope.
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Old 07-16-04, 05:13 PM   #3
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Aight thanx for the feedback. Can I get more feedback please???
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