10 Lines.
No Feeding.
No Crew/Hate/Dickryde votes.
Vote correctly.
Blind Spit.
Post within 30 minutes.

Good luck..

aight.. good luck dawg..

pay close attention..

Poor kid's postin like "Please, I'm Hot!" but your Steez is NOT
Trash your raps then Rearrange your Name.. n' Leave you Shhhot!
so don't make Open Callouts if you can't Handle the Challenge
..cuz I'll Knock ya head Sideways.. and Dismantle your Balance
Words so Blurred n' Distorted it's like you Spit thru a Cordless
you can Figure I'll leave this nigga Stiffer than Dick Rigamortis
you'll be Burnin After-Life.. it's like u're Attackin the Devil
Next time you wanna Battle, find someone who Matches your Level
your Lines Lack and you Rhyme Wack.. it causes Sleepiness Quick
you couldn't beat me.. if you kissed more ass than TP wit Lips



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This dude ever gonna spit?

Another one who cant read when someone goes O F F L I N E

I dont own a computer, i use my school's computer so my online time is limited

the last thing i said was i am going offline, did you not catch that?

before you challenge someone, make sure they are there still.

ill battle for the simple fact that you wrote ya verse already but you guys gotta stop

setting up battles without peoples consent. but 3 days later here i am.

That was hot! Now i gotta steal ya lyrics
SIKE!!!

Aiight here we go
(verse)
I got my dic cocked back and I'm ready fa blow
Just point it at ya bitch and hold it steady fa some heady mo
You turn confetti to snow? you already a pro?
Then Im like Snoop with a dutch Im ready to roll
Im heavyweight, you lightweight but Im the one that's to blame
cause i keep bustin shots at that lil nigga under ya name
I gave birth to ya style, impreganate you, I made you
And they only call you Strypes from all the scars that I gave
ST stand for stupid, you RYPE for me to eat now
You stood up and got beatdown so please take a seat now


for the ones who didnt get it: the 1st 4 lines were wordplay on that rhyme that he puts under his graffiti tagup, the next 2 lines were in reference of the football head nigga under his name and the last 4 lines were wordplay on his rap name
I hope you people vote based on skill

dat battle was good for a newb battle, but im gonna have to give it 2............strype he had better vocabulary and had harder punches...

no hate return the favour...

nah i dont agree....its punchlines and personals that win battles and hotshh! came that lil harder
the line below did it for me

I gave birth to ya style, impreganate you, I made you
And they only call you Strypes from all the scars that I gave

had me laughing my arse off..
but really... good battle from the both of you. i enjoyed reading it

vote.. hotshh!

sorry...... missed the you off that line i posted

i giv this to strype, i think he came harder with the punches,i also though his vocam was stronger and his structure helped,

hot shhh also came hard, bt i think he didnt hit as hard wit the punches,

nah...sorry hotshh but u lost.

strype had beta wordplay and metas....
his punches were funnier and harder...
hotshh woz jus spittin bout guns no creativity

no hate jus ma honest opinion

uppin for votes.. Riff, you sure you read the right battle? Did you notice the fact that he didn't use a single multi? Did you notice how choppy his flow was? Did you even notice that HALF of his verse, were MY words? Oh well, lol.. Nice drop hot, as far as personals.. If the entire battle were based on those, I think you may have had it.. I'm matching 5 syllable multis and usin' them as personals/punches.. The only multis in your entire verse, are the ones you took from my sig.. LOL.. vote fairly, on talent, please.. Thanks all, much respect..

strype's got it, it was catchy, nice flow. Rhyming was alrite, hotshh was good too but didnt sound as good

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Poetry Contest! Drop your Verses

sorry cant vote in this one, need 75 posts

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Poetry Contest! Drop your Verses

Uppin for votes.. could I get a few cats that've been here for more than 2 or 3 days? Some real, honest votes would be nice.. Thanks all..

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