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State Capitol 5 100.00%
:.anxiety.: 0 0%
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Old 07-11-04, 10:57 PM   #1
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State Capitol vs. Anxiety

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10-20 lines...
No crew votes...
No feeding...
Due midnight tommorow night... (est time)
 
Old 07-12-04, 07:41 PM   #2
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So i guess State realized how lame a name Killah Bwoy was...
But now its the font, not the name that still annoys us...
And if he was a state capitol, he'd be like Sacremento...
Not the best or biggest city, and its the same with a pencil...
Imma be like the british in 1812, and burn ur ass down...
U say u a state capitol, but ur more like a sad town...
Well we got a hell of a matchup, Anxiety vs. State Capitol...
But most feel that for State, this matchup aint practical...
Sittin at your computer suprised, at how my syllables came...
And now ur the leader of a crew, that doesnt have an original name...
Ur sig says that you cant stop the unstopable...
................................... Does that mean its impossible...
Bitch you aint even an obsticle... It aint just possible...
....................................... ...................... Its probable...
And his sigs colors is a predicition of how i leave him, black and blue...
Ur reppin ur sig with one crew merked...Lol... Dont make me laugh at u...
His user title says talented... So i think this guy might be conceded...
Hopefully strobe wont mistake ur battle verse as a freepost...
.................................................. .......And it wont get deleted...
 
Old 07-13-04, 01:53 AM   #3
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Lines Inflict more pain in your Kneecap then Tendan-i-das..
Kids Battlin me again? I already merked him under his Other alias..
Yes I exposed your other name, Charr you until ~:X:~Is-Gone..
Couldn't create "6" lines even if you were standing infront of a hexa-gon..
Anxiety spits many different variaties, of wackness to the RB society..
your wack, gay, and you just lost thats three ways you just lied-to-me..
Oh Ya and Brittneys mad, she said stop givin justin timberlake head..
anxiety agree'd and went for his gay band member "JC" instead..
Take my shank, rob you of your belongings, and your money in the bank..
Tries his hardes to overseide his expectations but stays on bottom rank..
Kids Lines are like his Replies Just A Waste Of Space..
Only Time You Spittin Holy, Is When your sayin grace..
Gettin beat by "hard Wood" only time your shits a headbanger..
Helpless victom of my anger, clinchin onto the top like coat hangers..
Been Makin Stupid Decisions This Ones Your Last, make it wise..
Like Male Pubic Hair, This kid stays attatched too Guys..
Last Lines, Whats it gonna be, are you scared..
But you didnt see one word i said,
Damn Doesnt it suck being Visionaly Impared..
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Old 07-13-04, 11:51 AM   #4
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uppin this for votes...ill return the favour.............
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Old 07-14-04, 03:37 PM   #5
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anxiety:not really as good rhyme for u. Your punches didnt hit that hard, u werent really throwin any hard punches, wasnt really any multis in there niether. There werent really anything that was really good in ur verse, jus a bunch of lines, so it didnt really keep my attention.

Stateretty good verse, u had some hard punches like the hardwood one, and the headbanger one. U also had ur share of personals in there too...i seen some multis, but u didnt really use em that good...but ur flow was stille pretty good, and overall i think u took this battle so...
v/state capitol...
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Old 07-14-04, 04:32 PM   #6
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NiCE Battle

Opener....

So i guess State realized how lame a name Killah Bwoy was...
But now its the font, not the name that still annoys us...

Pretty NiCe 9/10

Lines Inflict more pain in your Kneecap then Tendan-i-das..
Kids Battlin me again? I already merked him under his Other alias..

NiCe Also 9/10

Section/Tie

Bestline....

Sittin at your computer suprised, at how my syllables came...
And now ur the leader of a crew, that doesnt have an original name...

Dope 9.2/10

Yes I exposed your other name, Charr you until ~:X:~Is-Gone..
Couldn't create "6" lines even if you were standing infront of a hexa-gon..

9.4/10 Tight

Section/State

Closer

His user title says talented... So i think this guy might be conceded...
Hopefully strobe wont mistake ur battle verse as a freepost...
.................................................. .......And it wont get deleted...

Thatz Sick 9.6/10

Last Lines, Whats it gonna be, are you scared..
But you didnt see one word i said,
Damn Doesnt it suck being Visionaly Impared..

9/10 Descent

Section/Anxiety

Imma Have Say State Capitol Took This His Verse Stayed Consitant Anxiety You Wasted Alot Of Linez It was Good But A Waste So Winner

State...
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Old 07-15-04, 11:27 AM   #7
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So i guess State realized how lame a name Killah Bwoy was...
But now its the font, not the name that still annoys us...
not a bad opener...
And if he was a state capitol, he'd be like Sacremento...
Not the best or biggest city, and its the same with a pencil...
not feelin this bar...
Imma be like the british in 1812, and burn ur ass down...
U say u a state capitol, but ur more like a sad town...
not bad...
Well we got a hell of a matchup, Anxiety vs. State Capitol...
But most feel that for State, this matchup aint practical...
meh nothin special.. but it was alright..
Sittin at your computer suprised, at how my syllables came...
And now ur the leader of a crew, that doesnt have an original name...
not a bad line at all personal was alright tho...
Ur sig says that you cant stop the unstopable...
................................... Does that mean its impossible...
not bad punch..
Bitch you aint even an obsticle... It aint just possible...
....................................... ...................... Its probable...
not bad punch again.. not really good tho...
And his sigs colors is a predicition of how i leave him, black and blue...
Ur reppin ur sig with one crew merked...Lol... Dont make me laugh at u...
not bad personal...
His user title says talented... So i think this guy might be conceded...
Hopefully strobe wont mistake ur battle verse as a freepost...
.................................................. .......And it wont get deleted...
wasnt really feelin the closer... but the first line of the bar was alright



Lines Inflict more pain in your Kneecap then Tendan-i-das..
Kids Battlin me again? I already merked him under his Other alias..
nice opener... what was his alias tho i dont remember
Yes I exposed your other name, Charr you until ~:X:~Is-Gone..
Couldn't create "6" lines even if you were standing infront of a hexa-gon..
nice.. i liked it..
Anxiety spits many different variaties, of wackness to the RB society..
your wack, gay, and you just lost thats three ways you just lied-to-me..
haha not bad...
Oh Ya and Brittneys mad, she said stop givin justin timberlake head..
anxiety agree'd and went for his gay band member "JC" instead..
lol not bad...
Take my shank, rob you of your belongings, and your money in the bank..
Tries his hardes to overseide his expectations but stays on bottom rank..
not too bad..
Kids Lines are like his Replies Just A Waste Of Space..
Only Time You Spittin Holy, Is When your sayin grace..
Nice..
Gettin beat by "hard Wood" only time your shits a headbanger..
Helpless victom of my anger, clinchin onto the top like coat hangers..
not bad...
Been Makin Stupid Decisions This Ones Your Last, make it wise..
Like Male Pubic Hair, This kid stays attatched too Guys..
haha not bad..
Last Lines, Whats it gonna be, are you scared..
But you didnt see one word i said,
Damn Doesnt it suck being Visionaly Impared..
not a bad closer.. but it could have been better...


Overall State gets this.. he had better punches.. and the odd personal in his verse... Anxiety you had some good personals and punches.. but overall i thought State had harder hitting ones..

Anyways Vote - State

Good Spit by both..
 
Old 07-15-04, 12:43 PM   #8
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this was an okay battle


Anxiety-your verse was okay.....ive seen you come harder in different battles......your punches was okay but you deffintly could have reworded them just a little bit more so that they hit harder and actually koed him.......personals kinda weak but not really that weak.....didnt like your structure it was really uneven.....but your flow was okay.....overall i would give this battle an 8/10
but your verse wasnt the best so yeah

7/10


state-we got mad beef sometimes and shit but honestly you had the best battle man........your structure was a little bit better then Anxiety's so i will give your the struture part........your punches was just a little bit better worded then his so they hit harder and you take that......i liked the middle part of your verse the most cuase didnt really feel the opener.......but you took this battle just barly

7.5/10
 
Old 07-15-04, 09:45 PM   #9
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Old 07-15-04, 11:02 PM   #10
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Good battle breakdown.....

Anxiety.....So i guess State realized how lame a name Killah Bwoy was...
But now its the font, not the name that still annoys us...

Great opener, it was a harse personal an a effective one, but my question is what happened in the rest of your bars. This is all you had the rest was garbage, man it was really disappointing to read the rest of your verse, you had weak punches an attempted personals that just didn't work, you need to work on consistency cuz if you can open like dat, you can follow through if you had jus tone more personal like that you coulda took it man...I give ya a 6/10


Breakdown for state.......

Lines Inflict more pain in your Kneecap then Tendan-i-das..
Kids Battlin me again? I already merked him under his Other alias..

Yes I exposed your other name, Charr you until ~:X:~Is-Gone..
Couldn't create "6" lines even if you were standing infront of a hexa-gon..

Anxiety spits many different variaties, of wackness to the RB society..
your wack, gay, and you just lost thats three ways you just lied-to-me..
These 6 lines killed him, you kinda fall off after these but thses did the trick all three punches were nice an first 2 was great wordplay I liked them, you structure I didn't like but your lyrics got you the win anyway, you could also drop a little more constant though, flow was cool good drop man, I give ya.....7/10

Vote: State
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