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J_Trooper | 5 | 100.00% | |
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07-21-04, 01:03 PM | #1 | |
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2H2L Vs. J_Trooper
IP: EA56 91C1
aight the set up is- 5-10 lines no feeding no hate/dr/crew votes i dotn care who spits 1rst u got 10 mins after check-in
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07-21-04, 01:11 PM | #2 | |
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IP: EA56 91C1
J_Trooper at the end of this battle ima have u lookin like a pooper scooper....
J_Trooper agreed to my challenge but he didnt acknowleged my skillz/ got this nigga takin nerve pills cause hes gettin the chillz/ I do rap dealz not rap battlez but for this i can make an acception/ got ur ass in a do or die situation while ur callin for body protection/ hes got alot of effection so ima hurt em got him in a rope tie with gas/ ima burn em hes got no choice his ass is grass/ got him runnin hes at the airport askin for a free pass to the farthest city/ this guy is a hit n go got em lookin like a hariless kitty/ this battle is over i choose it to be me as the winner/ got u login off cryin and goin to eat dinner/ |
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07-21-04, 01:27 PM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: EA56 91C1
do i got a now show come on man spit i dont want this no show
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07-21-04, 01:29 PM | #4 | |
.::Blood Up::.
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IP: 08ED 5536
ya b u won this he didnt sho after tha time period but yo cqan u holla at my battle in ma sig....
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07-21-04, 01:39 PM | #5 | |
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
calm ya fuckin horses here i am
CHECK MATE aint no no show ova here i wasent on my computer but here i cum with my battle back Good Luck kid u gone need it
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07-21-04, 01:49 PM | #6 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
Grims u
Undastand my emotion is so focused neva has one been so hot and yet the coldes//t cop the metaphores that i send to u and any of them bitch affilates that u run with// probly secretly dien ya hair and exchange ya jeans and shorts for skirts// talk to ya pastor and convert to muslim and hopefully you wont get murked// cop the techniques kid im pre-warnin you im good// elax lips ah have u catchin em in the back like ricky off boyz in the hood// ya cd's ah neva reach up out the plastic// done battlein ni99az claimen they hard but they ass hole stretched out like elastic// get ya crew to beg and plead-wont matter you bound 2 end up numb like chris reeves/
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07-21-04, 01:51 PM | #7 | |
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IP: EA56 91C1
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07-21-04, 01:59 PM | #8 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
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07-21-04, 02:48 PM | #9 | |
... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP: CC64 8DC0
Not a great battle...both verses were kinda off... 2h2l aight start to your verse, but then your last 6 lines were wack, especially your closer..... J Trooper, decent verse, you came more consistent than he did, all around your verse was more on track, and ya punches connected better, your struc was a little off, and your last line din't fit... Struc was about the same from both...2h2l, your punches were way played, and since J was more consistent, he gets my vote
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07-21-04, 03:03 PM | #10 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
Troops Uppin
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07-21-04, 07:58 PM | #11 | |
you gotta hear me again
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IP: BC55 DF47
ok J_trooper had this on. good flow and style and complexity and vocab. however you forgot to rhyme the last line. it was like you just stuck it in there. um there were no personals that i saw so work on that. the punches were go but not directed to 2h2l. ithink you definally need work but the it was pretty good for a beginner. best line: cop the techniques kid im pre-warnin you im good//
elax lips ah have u catchin em in the back like ricky off boyz in the hood// 2h2l work on alot you were simple as hell. nad the flow was pretty gay style was ok. punch and personals (but since he's new i can understand). work on how simple ou lines are. this on you lost. best line:I do rap dealz not rap battlez but for this i can make an acception/ got ur ass in a do or die situation while ur callin for body protection/
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07-21-04, 08:21 PM | #12 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
Can i get a T.K.O?
Troopzzzzzzzzzzz
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07-21-04, 10:59 PM | #13 | |
New Jack
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IP: FDD6 AE15
2 hard your closer was no good and halfway through I lost your flow. J-Trooper I was feelin ya flow and I really like the Boyz in da hood crack, that was great. nice wordplay, ill vocab, good opener, ok closer.
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07-22-04, 01:24 AM | #14 | |
..."6s"...
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IP: 7953 1A91
troop,
ya personals was dope, and the flow was pretty hot, dunno why you didnt rhyme the last line tho... some nice punches pretty dope 2h2l ya lines were a lil basic, but i cant be hating on that, overall you did a pretty nice job, your style is pretty unique, not bad over all vote: troop for the hot punches
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07-22-04, 01:30 AM | #15 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
uppin
2eazy 2 me
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