10-20 bars aint really strict about that just dont write no essay n 30 min time limit otha than that lets get it poppin homie

u go first dog spit ur shit n well get it started then

Dont think bout it nigga go ahead n do it..
put the barrel in his mouth dont be scared n pull it...
but be verycareful round who you do it
get snitched out n life sentence thru it..
string-strung u could call me donkey kong..
cause the way it's looking soon you'll be gone..
so go ahead n take your day job. parrading in a thong
cause thats whats wrong with 90% of u fools.
fucking dick riding niggas vote to be cool
but it's all good, cause u wont keep me down
look at this nigga string he's a fucking clown
go ahead n think... while i see my shrink..
i'm sick in da head like dat nigga "Dink"
Soo wanksta.. go ahead pop something..
nigga really what u got? Nothing!!
sit here all day n battle 40 times...
day after day.. you'll start loosing rhymes...
but string go ahead it's your turn now..
against me we in a ring n w e got 12 rounds..
but i dont box.. i juss load it n shoot...
dont waste my time scraping or fighting for loot

why spit against me like u got a damn hope
why u on this forum. peeps from Florida cant vote
come against me u gon get ur tailbone splitted
i make MC's "rollover" like cellphone minutes
i get brain like i ate yall cranium
the gloc open up ya done like a baseball stadium
u wish ya raps even made half the sense of mine
i lift Mic's and gats in sets of 9
dont try n step to me cuz u not prepared
my flow like Jay-z, it'll Roc-ya wears
u dont play wit clowns, tho i might fool ya
put Ex-lax on the rounds so they'll go right thru ya
its crazy how i bless the forum,
u aint even nice like that, u rhyme wit less decorum
if u smart enuff, i hope u made some religious contracts
cuz i'll squeeze 2 in ya eye like pearl vision contacts
i'll have the priest doin ya rhymes at the eulogy
my shit is nuts when it drops like puberty
its that simple, duck when im plannin to cock
n run for cover whenever the cannon is popped HAAAA

why spit against me like u got a damn hope
why u on this forum. peeps from Florida cant vote
come against me u gon get ur tailbone splitted
i make MC's "rollover" like cellphone minutes
i get brain like i ate yall cranium
the gloc open up ya done like a baseball stadium
u wish ya raps even made half the sense of mine
i lift Mic's and gats in sets of 9
dont try n step to me cuz u not prepared
my flow like Jay-z, it'll Roc-ya wears
u dont play wit clowns, tho i might fool ya
put Ex-lax on the rounds so they'll go right thru ya
its crazy how i bless the forum,
u aint even nice like that, u rhyme wit less decorum
if u smart enuff, i hope u made some religious contracts
cuz i'll squeeze 2 in ya eye like pearl vision contacts
i'll have the priest doin ya rhymes at the eulogy
my shit is nuts when it drops like puberty
its that simple, duck when im plannin to cock
n run for cover whenever the cannon is popped HAAAA

why spit against me like u got a damn hope
why u on this forum. peeps from Florida cant vote
come against me u gon get ur tailbone splitted
i make MC's "rollover" like cellphone minutes
i get brain like i ate yall cranium
the gloc open up ya done like a baseball stadium
u wish ya raps even made half the sense of mine
i lift Mic's and gats in sets of 9
dont try n step to me cuz u not prepared
my flow like Jay-z, it'll Roc-ya wears
u dont play wit clowns, tho i might fool ya
put Ex-lax on the rounds so they'll go right thru ya
its crazy how i bless the forum,
u aint even nice like that, u rhyme wit less decorum
if u smart enuff, i hope u made some religious contracts
cuz i'll squeeze 2 in ya eye like pearl vision contacts
i'll have the priest doin ya rhymes at the eulogy
my shit is nuts when it drops like puberty
its that simple, duck when im plannin to cock
n run for cover whenever the cannon is popped HAAAA

string
brung more fire struc was pretty good chop down ya lines some kid
ummm ya punches where on point put up some more personals and u will b good 2 go
ok kk
dark
you were on point i was feelin where you were comin from i was feelin ya structure *jus a lil off* and ya punches were good didnt really see no good meta's tho and personals up them

my vote iz



String

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Darrk

Dont think bout it nigga go ahead n do it..
put the barrel in his mouth dont be scared n pull it...
->>who you talkin to?

but be very careful round who you do it
get snitched out n life sentence thru it..
->>^^^^

string-strung u could call me donkey kong..
cause the way it's looking soon you'll be gone..
so go ahead n take your day job. parrading in a thong
->>wasnt feelin this...weak punches

cause thats whats wrong with 90% of u fools.
fucking dick riding niggas vote to be cool
->>word...but not a battle verse

but it's all good, cause u wont keep me down
look at this nigga string he's a fucking clown
->>filler

go ahead n think... while i see my shrink..
i'm sick in da head like dat nigga "Dink"
->>dink? the dude off that Doug cartoon on nickelodeon?

Soo wanksta.. go ahead pop something..
nigga really what u got? Nothing!!
->>filler

sit here all day n battle 40 times...
day after day.. you'll start loosing rhymes...
->>filler

but string go ahead it's your turn now..
against me we in a ring n w e got 12 rounds..
->>kinda weak

but i dont box.. i juss load it n shoot...
dont waste my time scraping or fighting for loot
->>weak closer



String9487

why spit against me like u got a damn hope
why u on this forum. peeps from Florida cant vote
->>alright opener

come against me u gon get ur tailbone splitted
i make MC's "rollover" like cellphone minutes
->>funny but im sure its been done

i get brain like i ate yall cranium
the gloc open up ya done like a baseball stadium
->>cool

u wish ya raps even made half the sense of mine
i lift Mic's and gats in sets of 9
->>filler

dont try n step to me cuz u not prepared
my flow like Jay-z, it'll Roc-ya wears
->>what??

u dont play wit clowns, tho i might fool ya
put Ex-lax on the rounds so they'll go right thru ya
->>decent

its crazy how i bless the forum,
u aint even nice like that, u rhyme wit less decorum
->>wtf is decorum? thats a stretch to rhyme forum

if u smart enuff, i hope u made some religious contracts
cuz i'll squeeze 2 in ya eye like pearl vision contacts
->>cool

i'll have the priest doin ya rhymes at the eulogy
my shit is nuts when it drops like puberty
->>pretty good

its that simple, duck when im plannin to cock
n run for cover whenever the cannon is popped HAAAA
->>weak closer


string took this...his stuff was more creative and i liked it...some of the stuff sounded sorta like fabolous i thought. Good spit.

\/hit me up honestly\/

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Aight aight aight... Ima have to go with String on this one.. He had them punchlines that hit hard and Darrk's ryhmes i just really wasn't feelin that much, work on your punchlines and ryhmes more words in bars

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vOTE VOTE AND VOTE AGAIN ILL return the favor i need these battles closed!! lol

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

ANY VOTES AND I'LL RETURN THE FAVOR wit honest votes
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648
holla at me

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

my vote: String

Darrk: you flow was good other than that i wasn't feeling your verse it was more
of a free flow...to me

String: Had a better verse more fit for a battle..and he took all the major cats...here

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137463

Return the Favor...

uppin for votes ^^^^^ only need 1 more!!!!!!!!!!! i'll return the favor for nebody who votes

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock