yo ten lines
you got until midnight my time to drop
no d/r votes
no biting
no hate votes
no bull shit
you spit first

if you take longer than midnight this battle will be closed
i will drop after i check in

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

i'm dropping now............in bout ten min i'm going out

checking in

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this is a rushed verse, but i'm going out so......yeah
a little fucked up on flow i know

The only creative thing u pulled is ur own name, thats in Febuary//
For the next couple of months u’ve been causing huge catastrophes//
Just watch this nigga, I’ma make u focus,
So know this, I’ma use my hocus pocus//
Just to let u know I’m not gonna blow this
Problem is how u got 30 wins with lines labeled bullshit//
The post difference isn’t a problem, I call me a rookie with style//
When u hear this bitches verse, “blah blah check out my keystyle!”//
It doesn’t take midnight to make a verse, now label this slut: idiocy//
Cause my awesome lyrical flow “blows up” any kind of creativitie//

^^"blows up":what does the thing in my name makes
^^for the blah blah line, check out this guys member title

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await creativitie's verse.........

i was pretty fast

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this fake ass vet is getting too cocky so im hear to bring his demise

ur style is tired....u just left me in a hypnotic ~slumber`
stop blowin shit out of purpolsion, 94 aint ur atomic~number`
kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
turn up ur speakers and get ready for this round of applause`
my priceless freestyle just left the crowd in AAHHWW`
ur picking up ur lose, im helpin da crowd by pickin up thier jaws`
while i was making this thread i was waiting for ur evacuation`
my responsibilty as creativity is to cum harder than masterbation`
across da nation i smack ur face in wit these lyrical acuzations`

aight a real qiuck freestyle...nothing real good

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

flow creat
punches creat
structure def creat
vocab creat
complexity really neither
overall vote creat

sorry i didnt break it down verse for verse but i gotta get goin soon

can yall go vote on this it was like 1 of my first battles that's how long it's been open i need it closed cause i got tournys comen up thankz http://community.rapbattles.com/ima...line=1089261764

i agree.. create did win this, ^but about the structure.. he was just using a idfferent style.. most times in songs, you do that.. l9ike oyu will have a long line, then switch up styles a lil bit.. you just end your line on a diff beat.. but yea.. wasent really to much complexity in there..


flow went to create..
structure goes to create by a lil bit..
personals goes to plutonium..
Vocab def create


v/create
i saw you just spit enuff ot win..

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057
^me & poetic justice Vs. Maddog and Kingz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133427
^me Vs TRASE A.K.A LEGACY(tryna get this one closed..takin up a slot)

return a look in one of my battles please ..

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

flow,creativity,structure,vocab,and punches go 2 create
personals plutonium

ovarall create

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battles
me vs JpMoney06
me vs ostrich

uppin for votes............................................. .

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

sorry i couldn't post a better verse, i usually only get 1 hr of allowence on the comp, and when u set up the thread there was only about 15 min left, and i tell u, i ain't no typing wizard

oh well, i tried

hey i admit ur verse was hotter than my, i mean, ur the first vet i ever battled

uppin for more votes..........

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how sweet...............i will have this battle closed so you cant get lose alrite

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

nah im just plain....but you caN HAVE A REMATCH

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

^^dont rub it in.......lol

i'll think about the rematch

maybe another day

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