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Wow summer is so short I'm just playin some sports its
A bummer school is coming dum busts saying shit they spit Out wack Threads they poison like lead hate what I have said They lack skills young as a tyke dead weights got weirdass heads Copping there rhymes they skitzted sound like there blitzed Dropping there lines but it sucks pound them little fucks Don't show case flow pace is not there I don't care at all Cave boys getting sike drinks spike rare to find good cats ball Sometimes expanding my vocab never on a slab Dumbcrimes commanding the earth its wack like rabs Kids sleeping peeping the wrong shit I'm keeping reel to reel I'm snapping when I'm rapping pits of steeping deals I feel Shit can't change a lot of squabs smaller then shish kebab My freestying everchanging man when I wish the fobs In my head talk sprays will neva be squash gosh I'm board My steez is STARBURST its sweet I wash my sword Which is my mic my sprays are a movie these are the words of a Juvie |
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this was ok,
ya flow was decent but ya lines was basic u need to flip some of those lines and it also seems as if u was telling a story not rhyming which made it kinda of lame to read, keep trying to get more creative with ya lines, try adding some multis in there or upp'in ya vocab aight holla |
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can u also drop some feed back on my forgotten diss pt 2 thanks alot man.....
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Thanks dude I'm not sure what a multi is it like
Killing these fools like in COUNTER SKRIKE my weapons the MIC Chilling and kicking back Illing on the attack Is it like that? thanks for the feedback |
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