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Old 07-20-04, 07:03 PM   #1
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Smile tragic religion

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i also posted this in open mic but i did'ny see this here,i think it should be here instead,........

Some ya’ll believe its prediction ,but to me its jus fiction,
Poverty n hunger it aint fixin, hatred n racism is what its mixin,
It’itself is a contadiction , priests are practicing crucifixion,
How are those stories ta be true,this is what Im asking you,
What am I missing?these testaments don’t stick like paper ta glue,
They deceive weak minds & brainwash as they take your money,
I believe it’s a crime,but they claim it’s the wish of crist almighty,
Bible ta “cleanse yourself”,nah I’d rather jus believen myself,
Centuries past,religion’s been a scam,your money in there hand,
They will be eternally damned for tarnishing the word of man,
Your mind is yours n should’nt be tampered with by biblical myths,
Behind closed doors,priests are decietfull n full of shit,
Some alcoholics n others moleste the innocents of kids,
Open hand taking cash donations in the name of god,
Damn we all must admit it’s a fuckin brilliant fraud,
As this day turns to night a nun is confused on whats right,
She prays n deliberates for a day awaiting a final answer,
Kneeling B4 what she believes but only silence meets her,
Her minds bares blank thoughts, but her heart is heavy
She gives thanks n for her sin she will repent n is ready,
A single tear of shame rolls down her face,
Not dropped but caught by her pregnant waist,
She shakes n wets her lips clinching a blade in her fist,
She quietly recites 10 hail mary’s as she cuts her wrists,
This women has takin 2 lives 2 fix 1 sin,
Cause she was brainwashed by religion,….

Aight I don’t want any1 takin this the wrong way,
I know religion is a touchy subject for some,
this was jus a view,I aint religious it was jus something I thught of…
I’d relly appreciate some feedback considering this my first post…
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Old 07-21-04, 12:18 AM   #2
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this poem/rap is powerful u need to take it to a different level rate me if you can ~1~
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