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Energy 0 0%
sporadic 5 100.00%
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Old 07-11-04, 03:38 PM   #1
sporadic
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From: Swansea, Wales
Sporadic Vs Energy

IP: 6D2D 421B

10 Lines
No hate
No d/r
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Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

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Old 07-11-04, 04:20 PM   #2
ENERGY
-no one's iller-
 
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your spitting first by the way, I wrote it in bitch slapped the rules.
 
Old 07-12-04, 09:11 AM   #3
sporadic
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From: Swansea, Wales
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Calling yourself energy got me laughing but yet slightly intrigued,
Thinking my flaws will rejuvenate u like glucose
...coz your battle imaginations fatigued
Occupation is better than yours isit? Listing kellis song as your expertise
but yet your 16 and no qualifications
..waiting for the results of your G.C.S.E's
Fed up of herbs asking me to spit first illiterate got me in frustration
u like fucking girls? chea i was doing that
...when you just discovered masturbation!
Does mommy know about this site, you have permission and consent?
if she knew she block it protecting
…u from the offensive lyrical content! (laughs)
Could find any flaws could ya? As my lyrical talent increases
Got u looking for scrapes from my shredder
…coz ive left you in pieces

(explanations)

Bar 1- Was manly playing on his name..for those of u who don’t understand wordplay
Bar 2- His Occupation Is apparently “better than yours” well thas what it says in his profile and the gcses are the final exams you take b4 u leave school in the uk and those people are waiting for their results and hes also 16
The rest should be self explanatory
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Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase

Rapverse= No show Bigchase

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Old 07-13-04, 01:20 PM   #4
ENERGY
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your pretty funny makin rhymes about gcse's/
when ur dum and an't even learned about your abc's/
sporadic cut the three syllables leaves ya wid dick/
you can't rap sick, your shit and ur da one who's thick/
I guess you thought of ya lines from eminem, don't attempt/
if you tried you only get your fucking ugly bitch slapped/
this guys mental, because of his little small needle/
not even medical people could suss if it was REAL..../
your punches give me a alergy, and you an't no gee/
i'll slice your spleen and internally bleed and after leave/ (cya) lol
 
Old 07-13-04, 01:23 PM   #5
the metaphor
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sporadic got this one he seemed to have come stronger enegy yours was alright

v=sporadic

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Old 07-13-04, 01:25 PM   #6
ENERGY
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he went over the line limit and his punches were crap, you got 2 admit.
 
Old 07-13-04, 01:27 PM   #7
the metaphor
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he did go over the line limit i notice that after i voted sorry man you would have got my vote if i notice it before
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Old 07-13-04, 03:40 PM   #8
ENERGY
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upping for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 07-13-04, 03:50 PM   #9
Envee
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Aight man 1st dude u need 2 elevate 2nd dude so do u lol....

heres tha break down

Opener - Spo
Closer- Energy
Punches - Energy
Wordplay - Energy
Flow - Spo
Sturcture - Enegry
Multis - none

Winner - Enegry

And Spo u went over limit cuzz not good....

Weak battle... Energy gets it..

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Old 07-14-04, 03:03 AM   #10
sporadic
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i need to elevate!!! im wack u gotta be kidding!! i didnt go over no line limit either

line1 - Calling yourself energy got me laughing but yet slightly intrigued,
line 2 - spilt into parts Thinking my flaws will rejuvenate u like glucose
...coz your battle imaginations fatigued << punchline...this way the punchline is highlighted..ive seen ur shit envee lol << nuff said
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Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase

Rapverse= No show Bigchase

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Old 07-14-04, 05:41 AM   #11
ENERGY
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the facts are there you just wrote 15 lines that were ruled by yourself as 10 lines. How can you say you didn't go over the line limit of coarse you did and you do need to elevate.
 
Old 07-14-04, 06:12 AM   #12
TheStank
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No, the fact is its 10 lines but in a different style to yours you herb...
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Old 07-14-04, 07:12 AM   #13
sporadic
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energy i merked you any decent mcee with any kind ov interlect would know that!...fuck i cant wait to get out ov this herb front line shit..anyway ups!
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Sporadic is BETTER than BigChase

Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase

Rapverse= No show Bigchase

Now Tell me whos better?


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Old 07-14-04, 08:28 AM   #14
Mad Dog
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From: Crawley, England
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Hmmm an aight battle but my vote is going to Sporadic coz he was stronger in this battle in my opinion, his punches connected well and also had sum good wordplay and was quite funny at times.

Energy definitely u improved my teachings have helped you but 1 bar didnt rhyme but u gettin there, also ur punches werent as strong as Sporadics. But i will say u have improved since and all i can say is keep improving work on the wordplay and punches more and u'll get there dawg.

V/Sporadic

P.S Can i clear this dispute on the over the lines thing...Sporadic DIDN'T go over the limit, the structure he used is perfectly normal and adds complexity to the flow and breaks it down to make easier to read 5 BARS 10 lines all legit Sporadic did nuttin wrong in this battle jus add sum ... to make it clearer next time


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Old 07-14-04, 08:41 AM   #15
ENERGY
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mad dog are you just sending a hate vote man cause I know this we agreed to not post threads on each others battles and you have and gave a loada false infomation about this when he clarly has gone over the line limit and if you read the 10 lines your self from his verse and compare it with my 10 line verse it clarly shows that I came harder and thats a fact. He was way over the limit and his punches were weak adleast I had better punches, structure, wordplay, and closer. I'm only stating facts if you wanna listen to mad dog thats fine but he's toatally wrong.
 
 


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