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Old 07-22-04, 09:20 PM   #1
OrientalDun
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Just some spits/gimme feedback

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Yeah summer is going by so fast like SONIC I'm dope like the CHRONIC EBONIC, Still I'm cold lampin like ALADDIN my rhymes awewsome as MADDEN So much shit happening in IRAQ politicians saying we gotta defend we gotta attack bring the SOLDIERS back
BUSH you just in it for the oil why all this blood and toil eat the Soil on my kicks MAN! life sucks dumb fucks running the world there all greedy never helping the needy why they doing that dumb cats DAMN! SHIT! but I still spit my rhymes cuz all The drama getting shity so I just watch FUTURERAMA and just chill and spray ill raps that are in my dome at home typing it down I rep form CHILLTOWN I'm a class clown getting in trouble with Adults I'm the scapegoat everything I wrote is in my BOOK OF RAPS perhaps I might make a book of my spits that are off the HOOK or not but my lyrics are hot like a HEATER I drink a litter of water to keep hydrated hated by others cuz I do dumb shit They throw fits and sit and just critizie but my raps stay new as a suprise I'm fresh to def like a ICE BREAKER making bread like a Bread maker I wish the world was a better place and go on a new pace but that'll take a while so I just FREESTYLE and put on a smile cuz at least theres RAP it keeps me alive and I jive my words I wanna be heard by all my rhymes are off the wall like a TENNIS BALL
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Old 07-22-04, 09:27 PM   #2
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Old 07-22-04, 10:16 PM   #3
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oh lol sorry just started
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Old 07-22-04, 10:22 PM   #4
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post it in Open Mic
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Old 07-22-04, 10:43 PM   #5
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tip, put ya verse by linez, not all together cause u'll regret it later on
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