10 lines
House Rules (No Feeding, Ghostwriting, blah)
Spit in 30 min. after I do.

Checking In....

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Your spits couldn't hit hard, if they were platinum bars.
SO battling me's a 'dumb move' like 'pushing retards'.
Your fucking tight internals <-- Redefined to your sister.
So I'll be blocking this child, like public internet filters.
Me against him is 'unfair', but this emcee still being 'clowned'.
Cause he got a losing streak that even a blind man could track down.
Like 'upset diners', I'll put him 'back on the plate'.
Fucking fag, probably can't even walk lines straight.
Even his back is 'ajar' and I'll leave his 'blood spilling'.
Cause I'm 'breaking' this kid, like upset parents to children.
Should step to reality, everybody knows that he sucks.
I mean his name's the result of being 'sonned' to much.
He's the 'Master of Minds', yah, in a 'mental stance.'
Cause Energy's being owned like buying power plants.

^Sorry for taking so long, computer shut down like twice.

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Damn, could have made more, lol.

Anyways Good Luck

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percent shun are you the wackass cat who's on a pention//
your lyrics don't got tention just neglected like dey bin biten//
your the most ugly fucker who's on da rb site... now fight bitch//
he can't he's a little migit now watch me drop him wid drop kicks//
your a skits your definatly gonna lose......... to tell ya da truth //
and I know your secret you were bullied when you were in ya youth// ha
all you do is waste time on da inernet... your a reject easerly I detect//
battleing me you are simply will regret... you can't even get ya dick 2 errect//
your a pest... no one has interest..... what the shit you got 2 say//
try another day your gonna loose every day wid the bull shit you play//

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THAT'S RIGHT GANGSTA IS SHIT

LMAO [IMG][/Chttp://www.StupidVideos.com/?VideoID=332ENTER] [/[/IMG]B]

I just noticed you've got 5 lines more den me you said 10 lines?

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THAT'S RIGHT GANGSTA IS SHIT

LMAO [IMG][/Chttp://www.StupidVideos.com/?VideoID=332ENTER] [/[/IMG]B]

My B, I forgot to write that in the rules, but at callout I said 10 or more lines.
Good verse btw.

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Upping..... I'll return the favor.................

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weak but close battle percept gets my vote though he got better flowes and hit harder some of the stuff energy said didnt make since he had half a ryme and didnt finish it so it was a close battle,u both need better structure but u guys didnt do that bad good battle but my vote is percept

v/ percept

o plz drop an honest vote

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136555

Your spits couldn't hit hard, if they were platinum bars.
SO battling me's a 'dumb move' like 'pushing retards'.
haha nice opener
Your fucking tight internals <-- Redefined to your sister.
So I'll be blocking this child, like public internet filters.
Haha nice punch..
Me against him is 'unfair', but this emcee still being 'clowned'.
Cause he got a losing streak that even a blind man could track down.
Not bad..
Like 'upset diners', I'll put him 'back on the plate'.
Fucking fag, probably can't even walk lines straight.
not bad.. but not a hard punch.
Even his back is 'ajar' and I'll leave his 'blood spilling'.
Cause I'm 'breaking' this kid, like upset parents to children.
Not bad.. could be better
Should step to reality, everybody knows that he sucks.
I mean his name's the result of being 'sonned' to much.
Not bad.. its an alright punch.
He's the 'Master of Minds', yah, in a 'mental stance.'
Cause Energy's being owned like buying power plants.
not a bad closer..overall alright verse.. 7/10

percent shun are you the wackass cat who's on a pention//
your lyrics don't got tention just neglected like dey bin biten//
not a good opener.. kinda wack cause it didnt really make sense
your the most ugly fucker who's on da rb site... now fight bitch//
he can't he's a little migit now watch me drop him wid drop kicks//
nothing special.. not even a good punch..
your a skits your definatly gonna lose......... to tell ya da truth //
and I know your secret you were bullied when you were in ya youth//
meh.. nothing special.. could be worded better
all you do is waste time on da inernet... your a reject easerly I detect//
battleing me you are simply will regret... you can't even get ya dick 2 errect//
not bad.. not amazing but not bad.. tho u prolly spend more time on rb then him...
your a pest... no one has interest..... what the shit you got 2 say//
try another day your gonna loose every day wid the bull shit you play//
pretty sad closer.. no real punches.. overall verse 3/10

Overall my vote is goin to Precept Shun.. because he actually threw hard punches.. ENERGY.. learn to spell and work on grammar.. it was hard as fuck to read.. are you in like grade 5?? because you cant even put together a good verse..

alright well thats all i gatta say.. vote Precept Shun..

vote goes 2 percept shun bettah flow bettah punches overall

Punches: Percept shun
Flow: percept shun
structure: percept shun (energy i didnt like how u put da dots in da middle)
wordplay: percept shun


energy u gotta work on ur whole rap game na mean, i kno u got talent but u need 2 work on erything some mo iight na mean good shit 2 da bof of yall ~!i1i!~

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i stay straped bitch, aint afraid 2 Blast shit, its fantastic.....
n drastic how my hollow tips make ya body flip in backflips like gymnastics....

pop u 3 times flat, dawg do u see my gat?...
I'll push ya lid to da side like T.I. Hat......i'll snatch ya earings outcha ears n ya Pawned chains....
fa real im equiped Im a Cavalier like Lebron james.....

Niggas promise to God, den kiss dey Piece Wit Jesus....
Den Leak Some Deep shit, cuz dey Cant keep a Secret..

I liked all verses
Percept Shun: dawg... that... was... off... the... chain! very good man, the punches were "hard hitters" opening" good Middle: decent End: good your flow was also good wordplay and stucture were good your very good man
Energy: man... you need some elevating... yours is kinda weak but there was some good lines that turn things around..

my vote goes to Percept Shun
yo please vote on my battles man http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136736
once its done so i suggest you look at it at saturday

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Thanks for the votes. I'll hit your battle up after he posts his verse. Upping for more, I'll return the favor.

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Punches- Percept Shun
Personals- Tie
Flow- Energy Didnt Rhyme Very Well, Hard To Follow
Metas- Niether
Wordplay- Percept Shun
Multis- Niether
Originality- Percept Shun
Structure- Percept Shun

Final Vote - Percept Shun

Commentz- Seemed 1 Sided To Me, Energy Didnt Come As Hard As Percept Shun Did, Punches Percept Got Him, They Hit Harder And Were More Original, Energys Flow Was Choppy And Was Sorta Hard To Follow... Ight peace...

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