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.....good Luck

feel me ...

Let this beast stomp the grown 'iniquity', at the least stop ya own words, it's 'killin me'
you’ll never get a ‘record deal’ i'll flip the ‘sex a peel’ to make you feast-off ya own virginity
Im willin to murder dis dude, it’s too easy to win,just get me the rules and a ‘due date’
And I’ll make mo flips den IHOP,if I ever get close to losin to a nigga from the ‘UK’
Chargin with 'cavalry' Freeze your veins like Freezing Rain In ‘Calgary Sleets’
I'll compact your feces until your intestine tracts-deplete by half and Slain ‘Bowels Retreat’
My Wins is ‘AutoMATIK™’ … my flow will leave you mentally shocked, Im ‘causin Static’
I see you 15-4,you’re not use to losin … but battling me im causin 'habbits’
Flatten you out until you're see through, like displaying ‘Stormed Page of Vectors’
Eating you alive, Sh!tting out bones and teeth, like re-incarnations of ‘Hannibal Lector’

This sould be interesting …

Ya losing again the usual win for me I'll rattle~ya~block with lethal flows so
Most know the only time you have battles~on~Lock is when people no show

You went from learning to be a playa to a washed out Has Been like Bill BellamyCuz the greatest punchline your ass ever had was revealing you were Frankie Felony

AutoMATIK™ You gotta follow instructions ya need to read your manual Proper..
Rap 101- When I said Vet,......
.... he thought I meant Animal Doctor.

Look the way you beggin to ride, you'll get deserted for miles..
You more like a fucking spy......
... the way you been searching my files...

(this bars outta tune but since you dissing tha uk and no im not black)

Two words,
United States, no love, no brakes,
Low brow, high stakes, crack smoke, black folks
Big Macs, fat folks, ecstasy capsules
Presidential scandals, everybody MOVE

ahh fuck it i hurried.

jus felt like it.......
proves a point........

great battle

AutoMATIK™:Let this beast stomp the grown 'iniquity', at the least stop ya own words, it's 'killin me'
you’ll never get a ‘record deal’ i'll flip the ‘sex a peel’ to make you feast-off ya own virginity

8/10

Im willin to murder dis dude, it’s too easy to win,just get me the rules and a ‘due date’
And I’ll make mo flips den IHOP,if I ever get close to losin to a nigga from the ‘UK’

5/10

Chargin with 'cavalry' Freeze your veins like Freezing Rain In ‘Calgary Sleets’
I'll compact your feces until your intestine tracts-deplete by half and Slain ‘Bowels Retreat’
4/10

My Wins is ‘AutoMATIK™’ … my flow will leave you mentally shocked, Im ‘causin Static’
I see you 15-4,you’re not use to losin … but battling me im causin 'habbits’

7/10

Flatten you out until you're see through, like displaying ‘Stormed Page of Vectors’
Eating you alive, Sh!tting out bones and teeth, like re-incarnations of ‘Hannibal Lector’

8/10

overall 8/10

!RIFF RAFF!: Ya losing again the usual win for me I'll rattle~ya~block with lethal flows so
Most know the only time you have battles~on~Lock is when people no show

9/10

You went from learning to be a playa to a washed out Has Been like Bill BellamyCuz the greatest punchline your ass ever had was revealing you were Frankie Felony

7/10

AutoMATIK™ You gotta follow instructions ya need to read your manual Proper..
Rap 101- When I said Vet,......
.... he thought I meant Animal Doctor.

5/10

Look the way you beggin to ride, you'll get deserted for miles..
You more like a fucking spy......
... the way you been searching my files...

3/10

overall 7/10

vote: AutoMATIK

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I gott a say that Automatik is winning this again i loved the first bar and the last very good punch overall better flow struture and verse. man your on a winning streak. Riff raff you did good yourself to but some punches were not good the line that was good that riff raff used was the last bar overall good battle but automatik took this one agian

V/ Automatik

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Im not aboutto write a long para..but auto won this battle..he has some strong words in his verse..vocab was ok..the wordplay was ok..and the sturc and punches....riff raff..ur was kinda sloppy...it was an ok verse but now enough to win....


Vote auto

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ha ha this nigga ain't no joke.. best lines were:
Let this beast stomp the grown 'iniquity', at the least stop ya own words, it's 'killin me'
you’ll never get a ‘record deal’ i'll flip the ‘sex a peel’ to make you feast-off ya own virginity
Im willin to murder dis dude, it’s too easy to win,just get me the rules and a ‘due date’
And I’ll make mo flips den IHOP,if I ever get close to losin to a nigga from the ‘UK’
^ better opener by AutoMATIK.. (nice wordplay, aight vocab, aight structure)

Ya losing again the usual win for me I'll rattle~ya~block with lethal flows so
Most know the only time you have battles~on~Lock is when people no show

You went from learning to be a playa to a washed out Has Been like Bill BellamyCuz the greatest punchline your ass ever had was revealing you were Frankie Felony
^ not bad for an opener, but after this point structure fell off..
not a bad drop for either of you but the one who came harder happened to be AutoMATIK..

so, MY VOTE/ AutoMATIK!

~wun~

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