this some hot joint me and my boy did today..the intro aint done but the song is..so enjoy yall...this a good way to introduce yall into my boy ..im pretty sure yall gonna like him 1ne...


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/bronxskidmusic.htm


peace...

Heres the lyrics to my verse for those that like to read along..

My Verse


yo its ya boy sense nigga from that HnS clique//
blazin this shit,
cockin the semi just to sprey ya up quick/
if ya lip keep slippin im grippin several k's and some clips//
& the swift hit'll have ya life bitch now ya lay in ditch//
im sick tired of liars they fuckin got me wired //
what lies inside our saliva is hotter then fire/
imma ridah.. that'll pry guns//
killin evey civilian leavin not even one survivor//
i was little matured now i hit spit so raw//
im tellin yall my lyrics acidic clash wit it ya gone//
dawggg ..dont try me//
cuz when you see a light flash believe it aint comin from a highbeam//
you'll be dyin denyin us cats on the floor ya lyin flat//
you wouldnt a war i'll eat cha all a carnavore is i fact//
buy bat...go ahead and try to make some hits//
i'll cook you lames the game wont be the same once im inside of it// bitchh..


1ne,...

yo senser its saying page cannot be found

yeah i saw that too...its becuz soundclick is actin up..give it by tonight or so..if not by tomorrow they should have fixed the problem..1ne..

this joint should be workin now since soundclick is now up and runnin yall should make this a must peep feel me..holla 1ne..

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beat was aight,chorus needs work,flow and lyrics was hot.I give it a7/10 for a down south joint

thx on the feed back..but i dont know about bein off beat?..that puzzled me im (not to sound conceited) off beat.. na'mean..but anyways the feedback is appreciated i always like to hear what people think of the tracks i do..yeah the chorus was alil too simple but we wanted to hit a beat hard wit some down south flavor..my boy G-Felony from the south miami, florida to be exact..so if you've ever heard any down south chorus's their pretty simple feel me..but any ways thanx alot for replyin to


p.s. other cats can peep this also....and if your decent let me know if your interested on doin a collab im open to anythin na'mean 1ne..

senser and g felony hot shit... i liked this.. the chorus is a little choppy but other than that real good song...

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My Lines Are ILL yo

this shits hot

where did u get the beat