No Crew Votes,
No Biting,
No Feeding Off,
10-15 Lines
Due 30 Min. After Check In..

Let's Get It Started...

I can't check-in right now man..Ill be back in 15 minutes..you can write rhymes I don't care, I need to go to a BBQ for a quick second. Be back in 15 minutes.

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

Aight, I'm checkin in now, Im sorry man..once you check in..let's battle.

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

i'm here, go.......................................

Son, you said both of us will go at the same time.

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

drop yo verse man, I'm done.............................................. .......... waitin fa you..

I'm about to get in this dudes ass, like when Gerbals Arouse Him/
I treat this like a Hool a Hoop, the way I "rap" Circles Around Him/
I'm yo Grim Reaper, my flow seems shallow but like pools it Gets Deeper/
Fuck RB, and I don't like yo Shit Either, I "damn"(curse)yo "flow" like Big Beavers/
You get Zapped to Ash, coz like garbage men the stuff you Rap (wrap) Is Trash/
And you're not the type with massive cash, that, I think We Know/
You reading musical staffs is the only time that you count C-Notes (money)/
The 1 on yo check's lonley Without Zero's, pick up the pace like you Dropped It/
U not a MC, You could pour cement all on da "Stage" and still couldn't "Rock It"/
You're just Not It, so Stop It, you rhyme like you sleep walk Uncocious/
You're last battle was a true and total dissappointment/
It seems that you and whackness are stuck together like Conjoined Twins/
He Licks Ass, I Kick Ass n spit cold flows til saliva solidifies n I Choke on Ice/
"Unorijinal", You need to quit, you seem really drained, like Broken Pipes/
As a matter of fact, i'll cut yo arm off if I ever see you Hold A MIC/

I won't hold it against you.. but I'm giving you 15 min. from now to write a verse..I made it in exactly 30 min....

you should of been started cuz.....

Son, you had a little less than a fuckin' hour to write your verse, how do I know when I was out you didn't write it?

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

Bitch, rushin' me..

Let ‘da truth’ be told, I’m half this niggaz age N still I defeat him in a lyricist contest/
This guy couldn’t flow any better, even if I gave him a full-blood test/
I emphasize on his age ‘cuz I’m 14, he’s five years older, but couldn’t beat me/
I’ll put my M-16s to ya face make have dots like you had full-grown acne/
He’s 19 years old, a nerd, his whole idea of men suckin each other is called romancin/
I’ll put this dude to sleep shoot ‘em wit my desert on his feet, let this bitch do breakdancin/
His occupation says “EMT”, wonder what he does for a living to make pay/
‘Eatin’ Male Testicles’ everyday, then he opens up Orijinal’s CD and presses ‘Play’/
Don’t make any excuses like you on your ‘job’ or you had writer’s block/
Cuz’ you had until 2 o’clock, his dick so small, he couldn’t beat even if he was a “dick-jock”/
Nigga, rushin’ me while he had a 50 minutes drop a fuckin verse, 16 lines/
29-60-1 I know what you’re thinkin, that his record, no, it’s not his waistline/
So now nigga, you’ve learned your ‘lesson’ and no, I’m not teachin’ in college/
But, right now I’m the one who graduated high school, and U da freshman wit no knowledege/
Let me give this bitch a ‘bangin’ closer, maybe some fireworks tomorrow/
Maybe I’ll give him ‘tips’ during “E.M.T.”, but I ain’t talkin about money, talkin about ‘hollows’/

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

BTW here are the explanations:

M16s make red dots when you target at people.
"Eatin Male Testicles" - E.M.T. is his occupation it says on profile.
"dick-jock" - Disk Jock a.k.a. DJ he couldn't beat even if he was a "Dick-Jock" A.k.A. DJ
"29-60-1" - You know how girls have waistlines like they titties, then hips then legs, that's a waistline, I'm saying that's his record.
"tips" & "hollows" - Hollow Tips, the bullets.

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

ill vote for this if u drop an honest explained vote in my battle first http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

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STATE CAPITOL... You have to vote if you post in here cuz...........

I'm about to get in this dudes ass, like when Gerbals Arouse Him/
I treat this like a Hool a Hoop, the way I "rap" Circles Around Him/
1st line makes me think your gay, but the 2nd one was syck 6/10
I'm yo Grim Reaper, my flow seems shallow but like pools it Gets Deeper/
Fuck RB, and I don't like yo Shit Either, I "damn"(curse)yo "flow" like Big Beavers/
Damning his flow like beavers that was creative 5/10
You get Zapped to Ash, coz like garbage men the stuff you Rap (wrap) Is Trash/
And you're not the type with massive cash, that, I think We Know/
Dont understand the massive cash, but the garbage line was nice 5/10
You reading musical staffs is the only time that you count C-Notes (money)/
The 1 on yo check's lonley Without Zero's, pick up the pace like you Dropped It/
the C-note was creative I liked, the 2nd line was a filler though 5/10
U not a MC, You could pour cement all on da "Stage" and still couldn't "Rock It"/
You're just Not It, so Stop It, you rhyme like you sleep walk Uncocious/
Im not sure about using rock it and concrete together :-/ 2/10
You're last battle was a true and total dissappointment/
It seems that you and whackness are stuck together like Conjoined Twins/
This was a complete filler 1/10
He Licks Ass, I Kick Ass n spit cold flows til saliva solidifies n I Choke on Ice/
"Unorijinal", You need to quit, you seem really drained, like Broken Pipes/
this first line was creative 6/10
As a matter of fact, i'll cut yo arm off if I ever see you Hold A MIC/
not a bad closer 4/10

34/80


Let ‘da truth’ be told, I’m half this niggaz age N still I defeat him in a lyricist contest/
This guy couldn’t flow any better, even if I gave him a full-blood test/
Good opener 7/10
I emphasize on his age ‘cuz I’m 14, he’s five years older, but couldn’t beat me/
I’ll put my M-16s to ya face make have dots like you had full-grown acne/
M16s make ya have dots? 2/10
He’s 19 years old, a nerd, his whole idea of men suckin each other is called romancin/
I’ll put this dude to sleep shoot ‘em wit my desert on his feet, let this bitch do breakdancin/
not really a hard punch coulda been better 3/10
His occupation says “EMT”, wonder what he does for a living to make pay/
‘Eatin’ Male Testicles’ everyday, then he opens up Orijinal’s CD and presses ‘Play’/
Nice personal....6/10
Don’t make any excuses like you on your ‘job’ or you had writer’s block/
Cuz’ you had until 2 o’clock, his dick so small, he couldn’t beat even if he was a “dick-jock”/
Mediocre punc 5/10
Nigga, rushin’ me while he had a 50 minutes drop a fuckin verse, 16 lines/
29-60-1 I know what you’re thinkin, that his record, no, it’s not his waistline/
im not sure where you got that from? 2/10
So now nigga, you’ve learned your ‘lesson’ and no, I’m not teachin’ in college/
But, right now I’m the one who graduated high school, and U da freshman wit no knowledege/
This was more of just a filler 2/10
Let me give this bitch a ‘bangin’ closer, maybe some fireworks tomorrow/
Maybe I’ll give him ‘tips’ during “E.M.T.”, but I ain’t talkin about money, talkin about ‘hollows’/
Good closer also...fireworks and tips i liked 7/10

32/80

v/datruth


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