10-20 lines
no d/r,or bullshit
no freeposting

i dont care who goes first
goodluck

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due 30 minutes after check in

May da best man win

this is my check in

Im -N- da Buildin

R.I.P 2 all my falln soliders

Hustle Hard my niggs

Its a new year bitch-da game is ova
My whole crew here bitch-Im takin ova
My man said face it solider-
if rap dont work its back 2 dat bakin soda
On da blok tryna catch more cake dan oprah
I got shyt dat will leave ur face stuck on a posta
Talk shit den im sprayin da toasta
Sparkin shoot outs and start poppin off shit da way im suppose ta
U da type to make a move when straight scrappin da soap up
and aint nuffin worse den gettin shot as soon as u woke up
U got work dan im takin it solider*come here*
im takin ur pack-den breakin ur back and makin u throw up
Cuzz Kane's like a bomb Im just waitin to blow up
So add a lose to ur record-dont mean 2 b fukkin ur flow up

You tryin to be gangsta tellin me to
cock it back...
But you from da North,now theres an
interesting fact...
NovaKane,dumb name,you aint ready for the rap game,feel
the pain...
Verbal abuse,lyrical destruction,sure to leave you
insane...
I saw your battle against J,you got out wit a
5-0 loss...
In here,like a garden salad,prepare to be
tossed...
I'm toxic,but not as britney says it,I'm more like
acid rainfall...
Just like an injured racehorse get prepared to
be stalled*...
My punches'll make you feel woozy and weak...kinda like a
date rape drug...
Tryin to be 'big',but I'll fucking squash you like a
stink bug...
Soon,the only flow you'll get is that of
lake superior...
Drowned 50 feet,so you're bound to be
'inferior'...
Like an abortion fetus prepare to
be jarred...
And say goodbye to your fat mum,my click took her away for
sexual regards...

k^^thats my spit.i aint too good writing in like 15 minutes,i usually need time but i aint gon cook up exuces...let the best emcee win as youve said.

*-stalled in the stall where the horse is kept.

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uppin 4 votes....goodluck...

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Punchesawg
Flow: Nova
Originalityawg
Multis: Niether
Wordplay: Dawg
Structure: Nova

Final Vote - Dawg

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uppin 4 votes...

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Dawg takes this with better punches and a shitload of better metas. Wordplay too. Nova just talked about takin guns out and shootin and shit like that. Gettin played out. Dawg takes this easy with an even structure throughout the verse with good punches and metas.

Vote-Dawg

Vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136783

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^^thx,ill return tha fave later.uppin...

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come on peeps we need 2 get diss closed up
we still uppin

i gotta give this 2 dawg,flow n structure was nice ta read all your sentences had good form"except ya finisha"n had a point with punches,nova you came 2 much with that gansta talk,its good but you got skill you should've tried ta get some personals in there,good battle no hate ya'll..
vote/gawdfather

uppin 4 votes...

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Punchesawg
Flow: Nova
Originalityawg
Multis: Niether
Wordplay: Dawg
Structure: Nova

Final Vote - Dawg

yo and return the favor
delinquint vs. scriptive
delinquint vs. novakane

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