10 bar limit
no crew~d/r~hate votes
explain votes
verses due friday at midnight

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~~im checkin in for this battle~~good luck nigga~~

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im going to change the bar limit to~~10-20 bars~~just to make it more interesting

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shit last change~promise~i meant 10-20 lines limit~~

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Straight To The Point

Man ya sex life is like playing a game with dice/
a 5 and a 2 equals a 7 year old and 15 to life/

shits gettinn hyped like we at a mike tyson fight/
u couldnt handle my punches so u just had to bite/^^^
on my skillz,i give bitches more then thrillz/
den i send a "black plague"that does more then kill/

Diz nigga must b a pussy, or he is just fucking sick/
when he loses a friend,he yells to his crew L ost A nother D ick/
mus b a broke nigga got no job,see a dollar so he put it in re-play/
he got 2 apply 4 a job on da corner just for him to recieve-pay/

Ima ring your bell like im a musical conductor/
even with a hammer&nails u couldnt build a good structure/

you "try to say goodbye" buy you may see gray/ (macy gray)
if this dont kill u,i aint a "james bond" but u gon "die another day"

****Explanation****
"when he loses a friend,he yells to his crew Lost Another Dick/"
"mus b a broke nigga got no job,see a dollar so he put it in re-play/"

a link to his profile~
http://community.rapbattles.com/member.php?userid=33033

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Dudes alredy 0-2, up against me now and i kno he scared shitless
He pissin and shittin his pants, i dont kno how he expects to win this
He swingin and missin, i'll drop an ali line on him.. jus try and hit this
I float like a butterfly an sting like a bee, my lines are my fitness
Got no chance, he in way over his head like midgets in jaccuzi's
Aint seen him hold back tears like this since he saw titanic the movie
Try and move me kid, wat u tryin to prove, u cant get props from losin
I'm killin you, i kno we battlin online but my punches are still bruisin
Kid says he " da illest", sure is, guess u can say he got a terminal illness
Cuz he sure to die, i'm bringin death upon him with my homicidal sickness
That excuse of a verse he dropped was horrible, a disgrace to the rb
So rest in peace, kid tried to diss me but saw the wrath of the L. A. D.
Fuckin herb, i'll call him orageno from now on, cuz im cookin him up
Im hookin him up wit punches, he done already, this rook is fucked
I'll crack ya lines, im makin em look like absolutel nothin against mine
Shoulda stuck wit ya own kind, battlin me u must a had a lapse of mind

daillest1, your verse was well organized but your punchlines were not all that so with that said Black Plague get's my vote for not really good struture but for her punchlines. keep doing your thing ma. me and you will battle again soon. lol

Alright, alright, good battle. Close one in my opinion, daillest i was feelin ya verse till it started windin down towards the end, it just got weaker and weaker with each line, started off hot and ended cold. if u had been consistent u'd a got my vote. like that macy gray line, super weak dawg, but that's in my opinion. i liked the dice line though.

plague, your verse was decent, u came just that much harder, started off kinda weak but picked up towards the end, the opposite of daillest verse. was feelin some of your punches, so since you seemed to stay consistent wit your flow you get my vote

vote= plague

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

dailest1-Wack Booo Booo Wack ass hell and had overall original
verses and not Much hit hard lol but pretty good Try THough
lol

The Black Plague-You Murked him and Had nice Punches Overall
had Elevated alot since last time But Some nice punches
and good Flow

v/TBP

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Aight uppin, thanks for tha votes...

Drop links and i'll return the favor

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