10-20 bars 30 min limit n other than that lets get it poppin

dawgfatha i hope u aint turnin into a bitch on the down low

sry i wasnt on ill spit later today.checkin in

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After I type these words you'll be paler than a sheltered
latina....
My 'illness' will have spread onto you like
scarlatina*
Your talent is rotten like a week old apple
core...
One battle takes all your juice like one step for Maxwell
Devore**...
You called me a bitch in my other battle but I aint scared of no
Internet punk...
Don't be scared little one, in my fury I'll just 'slam' you like a
basketball dunk...
Insult me once more and I'll leave you 'holier' than my boi
St.Paul...
Your bitch told me you couldnt have a big load even if your name
was U-Haul...
Your timing could never be correct even if you were holding a damn
stopwatch...
You say you get sec but it's probably from your
pappa's crotch...
Your only friend is your dick and your
hand...
Your balls don't count cause their total area is equal to
5 grains of sand...

*-Scarlatina-highly contageous Italian originated disease.Also known as the Scarlet Fever.
**-Max Devore is a character in Stephen King's Bag of Bones.He is 80 approx. and he's in a wheelchair.The most he can walk is like 3 paces.

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String is in the building....

If the shit aint unlocked, bet ima brake thru
the rocks on my neck is the size of grapefruit
not givin u a break, but ima make u take two
n while ya mans front, u can hate too
if u cant stand the heat get goggles
now u cant find the words like u got beat in boggle
me n my peeps, aint no crew bolder nigga
my bullets is pimps too they brush off ya shouldas nigga
u bet duck when i cock the hamma
cuz my triggas is freshly squeezed like TROPicana
aint shit cuz i got chiba, give u a hot fever
u betta believe i pack tools like Bob Vila
im sick of these soury flows, watch how my salary grows
eliminate rappas like reality shows
im good wit the knife, n im sick wit the six shooter
this gon b the day when dawgfatha gets neutered
.....FLOOOW SWWWITCH!!!
eh yo when these gats, is squeezed fast, u betta react
cuz three blasts from these gats make bigg niggas LEANBACK
i hook up wit ya main squeeze, look how my chain freeze
pop u in the head it look like ya brain sneezed
i spit sick, its sick shit, i flip quick
treat u like a manual stick ya shift quick
soon enuff u bastards'll know, capture the quote
gimme the crown its the master of flows
Its the Executive,comin wit checks and balance, i wreck ya balance
knock u off ya feet with a set of talons
instead of wilin, i'll collectively clap u
then its like christmas festively wrap u
the saddest fate, is when im come blastin the twins
im blastin ya friendss, leave ya brainz in the dash of ya benz...clown

DawgF won this good rhymes and nice punches
needs a better structure but it was still good
multis aight that all i got to say aight
u got my vote

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uppin 4 votes...

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String u had aome good metas and punches but u ruined them wit some commercial rhymes whether their true or not I didn't feel it. So I say dawg.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137399
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137393

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No Grudges.

uppin...

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